|Reviews for Five Times Bella Swan Did Not Kiss Jacob Black|
| liragreen chapter 2 . 5/31/2013
"Somewhere still out there is a seventeen-year-old boy whose beautiful face still comes up in her mind like an unclear, smeared painting of unattainable perfection. She is twenty-six."
You know, for all of the Jacob/Bella stories I've read, and for all of the absolute sureness I've had since reading the original books that Jake and Bella belonged together, it has never occurred to me this clearly that Edward, forever 17, would still be out there. And that Bella would have to deal with that fact every time she thought of him.
Beautiful drabbles. I am so glad I stumbled upon your stories. You are an amazing author.
| liragreen chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
Sweet, sad, hopeful, beautiful, sexy. What lovely little glimmers into Jacob and Bella's world.
| BrookeBelikov chapter 2 . 3/24/2012
| LadyofSpain chapter 2 . 5/13/2011
Gosh, this was so beautiful. Jake's emotions were heartbreaking. I really felt for him. I was glad he got the girl. That's my Jake!
| purelyamuse chapter 2 . 5/11/2011
This was stunning. I loved his soft perspective. You've created a very sweet Jake here. I enjoyed the simplicity of their romantic moments.
I am left wanting their first kiss though. I'm wondering where, when and how it happened.
The ending was perfection. I love how he just let her sit andbe still. He never expected too much of her and I loved that.
| Whats Mine Is Yours chapter 2 . 11/27/2009
i really like the description, especially in the first part
really good :P
| Lecidre chapter 2 . 9/17/2009
Such a moving story. You captured the characters so well and the alternate ending is just fantastic! I really love how you wrote Jacob and Bella here, they're like a perfect match in this fic. Love it!
| nerdhawaii chapter 2 . 6/23/2009
You are such an incredible writer. I am amazed at the depth you give characters that even the creater neglected (Bella, always that Bella, whom I habitually despise). Thank you for writing and sharing this.
| The Capslock Critic chapter 2 . 5/21/2009
These are just awesome.
| Dazzle Me Again chapter 2 . 2/20/2009
Oh, that was so sweet! I loved it. Especially IV.
You did a fantastic job with this. It was perfect. Absolutely perfect.
Have a wonderful day!
| Sabyn1993 chapter 2 . 1/9/2009
This story is so good. I love it. It's just perfect. you have a great idea by writing this! Good luck and keep it up!
| caffeineaddict13 chapter 2 . 12/11/2008
Oh, this is so beautiful. The characterizations are spot-on and the descriptions are gorgeous. I always love a little bit of angst, and having Bella still think of Edward is more realistic than forgetting him completely, even for Jacob.
| CoffeeQueen chapter 2 . 12/1/2008
Wow! :) That story was great. I love how you started at the beginning and then looped it around at the end. The writing was excellent! You made the characters actions seem so real and life like. Outstanding job, really. :)
| Jot G chapter 2 . 12/1/2008
Beautifully written :)
| mag721 chapter 2 . 12/1/2008
Wow. That was really amazing. I just hate that I'm so dense that i don't understand part V... I mean, I have a sort of an idea, but i just don't know. Wow. That story was REALLY good. I'm very impressed.