Reviews for The New Dawn
FreelanceBum chapter 8 . 11/9/2013
Its not hideous, its not wonderful. It is amusing enough to pass time though.
af an of yo ur s chapter 8 . 12/21/2012
what! this is amazing i love it, please don't stop writing.
if you have not notticed THIS IS A FLAME!NOT ON YOUR BOOK BUT ON YOU!
DON'TDO THIS TO ME, THIS IS THE FIRST GOOD FAN FICTION I HAVE READ SO FAR!please i think this story is perfect, don't stop writing it please,

af an of yo ur s
poisinrose chapter 8 . 12/5/2012
aww and I thought uit was going so well to! T.T well what you gna do I hope someone continues this soon
Courtney chapter 8 . 11/20/2012
Dude saying it sucks is far too harsh. Personally I liked your twist with the polyjuice potion and I thought this was a nice change to the usual time travel stories
Senyor Fier Mensheir chapter 8 . 10/12/2012
You could just continue it. It looked cool and read cool, to me at least.
jenn008 chapter 8 . 8/27/2012
I like it so far!
Undermann chapter 8 . 7/5/2012
You're very tough on yourself... I've just read through what you've got here and find I'm very disappointed there won't be any more. You had a good little tale going on with a few nice twists here & there - shame you've lost faith - your story and writing is better than you think.
kyuubi-rain chapter 8 . 7/14/2011
tis rather quite sad i was somewhat enjoying this story i hope you will decide to come to this maybe rewrite it to your satisfaction?
SimFlyer chapter 8 . 5/21/2011
Oh i was enjoying that, but writers choice i suppose.
Basill chapter 8 . 4/28/2010
No! This was turning out to be great! Plz don't abandon it! Plz!
nightwing27 chapter 8 . 4/18/2010
I can't believe another idiot who doesn't have faith in his story good thing no body likes your other one after you quit on this one. Why even read the other one you just will do the same thing and quit. Good thing I ill never quit on my story and never called it sucks
nightwing27 chapter 7 . 4/18/2010
good chapter
nightwing27 chapter 6 . 4/18/2010
good chapter
nightwing27 chapter 5 . 4/18/2010
good chapter
nightwing27 chapter 4 . 4/18/2010
crazy old fool going crazy after losing his weapon
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