|Reviews for Team One|
| Ghost chapter 5 . 9/5
Wait, what? You stopped?! Come on! This was a great story! It had amazing length in chapters, it built up great tension and scenarios, not to mention very well written with the crossover elements.
| Kitsuneko toruna chapter 5 . 7/17
Aw! Why'd you stop? This story is really well done and one of the few in which I actually enjoy naruto being a knucklehead.
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/24
Please update soon
| Mighty Bob chapter 5 . 5/3
Been poking through several of my older bookmarks, a few of which include your stories. Or older stories as it were...and I hate to nag authors since you aren't obligated to write anything or your muse might be on strike or whichever...but I hope you come back to this sometime. The story was interesting and diverged in fun ways.
Probably gonna copy and paste this to a couple other stories of yours that I like and hope you get back to, my apologies if it comes across as spam. I really do want to see more of these storylines.
o7 Mighty Bob
I like NaruHina, back when the series was just starting and all you could find were a few fandubs as well as later on when the series became 'mainstream' and was rather happy that the pairing won out in the end even if it really came across as sort of tacked on and oh yeah, this happened too...
That being said ( and this is just opinion, not trying to steer the direction this story is going. I'll keep reading if you keep writing ) it'd be fun/interesting to see Naruto paired with someone else ( not Sakura I hope, that ship was doomed before it started, here and in general. ) Perhaps Ayane or TenTen or Ino.
I like the idea of Ryu/Kasumi so that's fine as them being Naruto's friends/elder sibling influence, but really the idea of falling in LOVE with and marrying your childhood sweetheart is just overdone, it's pretty rare for folks who pair up as kids/teens to last into adulthood or lasting relationships.
Just my four cents, hope you get back to this sometime soon! ( yes I can see it's been 4 years but I can hope, can't I? )
| Idris2000 chapter 5 . 4/18
Great story! I will patiently wait for the next chapter.
| IsoldeAhlstrom chapter 5 . 1/24
Hooooo boy, I love Lee and Gai! Very well done! I look forward to more chapters!
| IsoldeAhlstrom chapter 4 . 1/24
OH, man, Azula! I love it! Well done!
| IsoldeAhlstrom chapter 3 . 1/24
Sage Roku Aang Zuko, eh? Tee he very nice! Well done!
| raeesmerelda chapter 5 . 8/23/2015
I was really liking this story, so I'll add it to my alerts just in case you ever return to it.
| xx sHioN chapter 5 . 8/6/2015
Are you still updating?
| jo chapter 5 . 7/23/2015
| Vibrolux61 chapter 4 . 7/21/2015
Any chance of continuing this? Great story so far!
| missmentle chapter 3 . 5/24/2015
Can you do a chapter of them competing in the chunin exams, it would be like, the best thing ever!
| missmentle chapter 4 . 5/24/2015
Nice, little Avatar reference in there.
| Anon Omus chapter 1 . 4/16/2015
Is there any chance you are going to continuethe story?