Reviews for Blue, Blue Eyes
cora.brooke.7 chapter 11 . 10/11/2014
I hope you contuin this story! *peace sign!*
cora.brooke.7 chapter 2 . 10/11/2014
Love how you did that with the Shadow Lord too! I mean, I did the same thing with the Shadow Lord, calling her Shadow for short. It just made sense to me
Madgirl2424 chapter 11 . 8/26/2014
Please oh god the susspence is killing me make more ASAP please!
Infinite Ways To Insanity chapter 11 . 5/7/2014
I love your little weed and quirky poems/songs/things!
Cicero's Hat chapter 4 . 9/2/2013
Your a boy... Really?
Just a sterotypical assumption but... I thought all yaoi writers were horny 13 year old girls.
Bah oh well.
Congrats! For writing that... Must of been quite awkward but good job. I think they should of made out more and gone slower but other than that it was alright.
Just need more... Hesitating?
Any way, well done.
silverxkotone chapter 11 . 11/25/2012
i really looooovvvvveeee your story!
anonymous chapter 11 . 8/27/2012
do u need motivation?
theverysexysadisticdoctor chapter 11 . 1/24/2012
This is my favorite deltora quest fanfic and I've read it over and- I'll just cut to the chase: when are you goin to write the next one? :/
ChocoVanille chapter 3 . 10/17/2011
I read this story a long,long time ago and was craving Lief/Dain, but I could not find this story! Thank heavens I did. Iq m adding it to my faves right away.

Ciao,

YVF
fjeigjidjigjiejg chapter 11 . 7/13/2011
... Wow.

Great story, great plot.

Keep writing! I can't wait until the next update.
Azaelia Silmarwen chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
Love it.
AdvanceShipper4Eva chapter 3 . 8/17/2010
Re-reading those reviews, maybe my friend wrote them (she has a very dirty mind), she was staying over at my place and because I am the only person that uses I have it set to remember me... anyway she had been searching through my favourited sites so maybe she found this, read it and put that dirty mind to work... As I have said before, as far as I am aware the only ones I remember writing apart from my various apologies were: Reviews for Chapters 11 & 6...
AdvanceShipper4Eva chapter 2 . 8/9/2010
Just to correct myself:

Chapters 11 & 6 were the first few reviews that were any good...

The Japanese *sort of* ...

... *fic* ... (not fix)
AdvanceShipper4Eva chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Just to let you know anonymous reviews are disabled...

Why is it that you are the only one to produce a multi-chaptered LiefxDain story? You and LadyLapisLazuli are about the only ones with decent LiefxDain stories... I have chapters 2-11 copied into 'NOTES' on my iPod because you are such a fabulous writer... You left the ending of chapter 11 a cliff hanger... I'm sorry about the other reviews, sleep deprivation does that to a girl... Though the first few I meant, sort of, as much as you can mean that sort of thing about a fictional character... (the first few are chapter 11 & 10 I think...) Dain is a wonderful character though... The Japanese sortbof ruined him when the were adapting deltora quest into an anime... He DOES NOT have purple eyes! He has the most beautiful chocolate brown eyes...

Do you have a copy of maze of the beast handy? If so what colour is Dain's hair? I'm trying to write a fix of my own and I need Dain's hair colour... Curse this Godforsaken forgetful mind of mine!

You are the only person to be able to bring Dain "back" without it seeming unrealistic and stupid...

Dain's betrayal truly shocked me at first but this made it all better... Dain and Lief are sooo good together... Are you almost done writing chapter 12? My Blue, Blue Eyes desire more... Yes I do have blue eyes the just aren't as blue as Lief's... Mine are only cornflower blue not a deep, penetrating sapphire blue *pouts and complains*.

I'm sleep deprived again so I'd better finish this up before I enter another of my lustful tirades over Dain.
AdvanceShipper4Eva chapter 6 . 8/5/2010
So many spelling and grammar problems, must be tired cause I am generally wonderful at English

Yes I am aware that Dain is a fictional character but I'm allowed a harmless infatuation with fictional characters every so often

My Dain

Wake me up

(Bid my blood to run)

I can't wake up

(Before I come undone)

Save me

(Save me from the nothing I've become)

I have blue, blue eyes just like Lief...

We do what we must

Because we can

I'm not even angry

I'm being so sincere right now

Even though you broke my heart

And killed me

And tore me to pieces

And threw every piece into a fire

As they burned it hurt because

I was so happy for you!
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