Reviews for Transparent
janrockiss chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Who are those two figures? Ahhh can wait for the next chapter :D

I'm guessing that Lev is...Lavi? Heh:D
BreathexFreely chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
finally! a good Lavi story! i've been looking and looking and looking and i found this one! but..its been like two years since u posted it D: but im still hopeful (REALLY hopeful o_o)that you'll update...
Attack 224 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
i kinda think it's cheesy in a way. BUT IT IS A GREAT STROY! it's so great i misspelled story. :D
eternal fire123 chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
hurry and update its interesting
LilithValdis chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
wow, interesting i loved it! O.O

please continue! :D
general zargon chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
This is an excellent start to a story, and I hope you continue it! I'm positive that "Lev" is "Lavi" in the future, but I'm just guessing that the two ghosts are Lenalee's parents. Am I right? Anyway, please keep up the excellent work and update soon please! :)
sakura-angel113 chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Awesome first chapter. :] I didn't notice any mistakes.

I have no clue as to who the two ghosts are, but I'll guess... Are they Lenalee's parents?

Please update soon! _