Reviews for Provocative
Dreadful Oblivion chapter 1 . 3/25
:D :D
Omg it's so gooooood,!
I can totally imagine Edward saying something like that!
hoigui chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
haha this is so cute and funny I loved it
LeeseeQ chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
That wasn't lame at all. It's interesting to think of that dynamic of them all going to high school together isn't it? I love Edward's "prudishness", it's perfectly delicious! It's a good thing I didn't read the Twilight series before I was married- Edward would have raised the bar so high no mere mortal could ever measure up!
ThatOneQuirkyFangirl chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
I love it hilarious!
ann ly chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
I always love family drama

You are great with this family, they were my fav.

Bella being Bella, Alice being Alice, Renesmee as a teenage, and protective Edward.

LoL for Edward has to act as a brother toward Renesmee, cute!

Thank you bb
HozLuv09 chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
plz continue its great
Rebecca Cullen 1991 chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
haha i love over protective Edward although i couldnt deal with him being my dad!
kimbella chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
i think this is so cute! i loved it!
carlisleedwardemmettjasper chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
I really liked it i dont know why you dont i really liked it but it would have been really funny if you would have brought Carlisle into the situation! 3 :)
Liv. The. Night. Writer chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
this seems very edward-like XD i love family moments with edward and nessie...

btw, you should like this story, it was very cute and fluffalicious :D

AColdAndBrokenHallelujah chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
That sounds like a cute suit! Dumb Edward :P
Grace'Cullen.x chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
Mismatched.Harmony chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
well you might have thought it was lame but i loved it. very creative idea for a Edward-Nessie fluff moment.
styling16 chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
i hate renesmee she's a spoiler in the story... i only like her when she was still a baby but when she grows up she turns out to be a spoiled brat and it's annoying!

but good story though :D
Mrs.Alisha.Felton chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
I loved it! That is so Edward! Plz write another chapter! Plz, plz, plz, plz...
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