Reviews for A Life to Save a Life
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
Nice story; you've got lots of potential here. It is kind of hard to read- don't be afraid of line breaks and more chapters. Clarifying the dialogue with new paragraphs would probably make the most dramatic change in that department. Keep it up. I enjoyed reading.

myrmidryad chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
Good story, but hard to read cos of the dialogue. You need to start a new paragraph ever time someone else speaks. It gets really confusing an hard to follow otherwise.