Reviews for First Line of Defense
Linguam chapter 3 . 2/15
"Considered tying him down." Roflmao!
LaedieDuske chapter 3 . 10/19/2010
LOL Sometimes I think tying him down might be best, and not just in my fantasy world. Stubborn man. And of course "I would like to see more of this" goes without saying...but I said it anyway. -grin- Nice work in little bites, telling the critical parts and keeping the reader reeled in.

Carol chapter 3 . 1/11/2010
Dude, that was awesome...
amyblair chapter 2 . 1/18/2009
Yep, yep... loved the forest was inky... great starter.

Nice, nice drabbles.
parisindy chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
hehe aww poor dean

well done :)
twinchaosblade chapter 3 . 12/28/2008
Oi, the second to last sentence almost made me spew my tea over the keyboard...

Lovely drabble with fine descriptions, especially how fuzzy everything went for Dean. Loved the careful/concerned mood of this installment.
supernaturalsammy67 chapter 3 . 12/23/2008
OMG the wording on this was awesome!




you did such an amazing job hun!

i reallyy loved this fic and the combined chapters with challenge words

you've really outdone yourself

it was brilliant!

Muffy Morrigan chapter 3 . 12/21/2008
Great job! Love this entry, great use of the word

Five freshly waxed, lovingly detailed Impalas.
Onyx Moonbeam chapter 3 . 12/21/2008
Okay, so many lovely parts. "Sam's shotgun reacted." I love that Sam didn't react with the shotgun, but it's SO second nature that the shotgun reacted without the thought even crossing. Perfect sentence.

Also, I adore, "The car. The hotel. The bed. Time stuttered."

And of course, "Considered tying him down. 'Dude.'"

I love how it ties all three stories together. Awesome!
Soncnica chapter 3 . 12/21/2008
Fast in the beginning then slow in the end and then boom:

Considered tying him down.


and nothing but stillness...

Loved it. Just words and short sentences...great work.

InSecret chapter 3 . 12/16/2008
Sorry I'm so late with this...

Adorable drabble as always. My favourite line:

Discomfort left Dean restless. Sam gentled his movements, protected him while he slept.

*makes incoherent gleeful noise*

Lovely :)
Twinchy chapter 3 . 12/15/2008
"Considered tying him down." With all those selfless things Sam did for his brother, I certainly wouldn't have expected this. LOL

I can understand the younger man's resigned wish to do so though. Dean's a hand-full when he's sick or injured but still able to try and make the helping hand want to throttle him.

Mad Server chapter 3 . 12/15/2008
Oh hey, I thought you hadn't posted this week! Apparently I didn't recognize the title in the notification email. This is one of those times when it's good to be wrong.

I love me some grimacing, hissing, breath-hitching Dean. I love how he resolves himself, tries to conceal his pain. But my favourite is Sam mopping blood from his head and protecting him while he sleeps. Steady, gentle Sam. Gnuh.

And the ending makes me smile. I don't know if this is what you intended but I pictured Sam busting out the rope, coming at Dean all stealthy-like... and then feeling uber-silly when Dean reality checked him with his "Dude." Being like, DARN, OK you're right, but then how will I keep you still...?
DeansBabyBird chapter 3 . 12/15/2008

Tying him down! Heehee you bad girl! Nice! Bev xx
Dreadedfemale chapter 3 . 12/14/2008
So wonderfully tense. Then..

"Considered tying him down.


Absolutely perfect.
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