parisindy chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
ew and hehe great job
DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 12/30/2008

Bad girl, brotherly abuse! Heehee lovely!

Bev x
twinchaosblade chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Oh, that was so good! I adored the heck out of this terrific drabble, everything was just right! What a bad nightmare for big Sammy, and poor Dean getting caught in the stomach for trying to wake his brother up. The subsequent smack to the cheek was in more than one way well deserved.

jasper03 chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
Ooh vanessa good job! You should really continue the drabble and make it a cute little oneshot. Poor Dean, he rescues the kid from their burning house, protects him with his life, loves him with all his heart and what does he get? Kicked in the gut when he tries to wake his brother from a bad dream! I daresay Sammy deserved the smack...evil grin...
Twinchy chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
Ohoh, nasty thing to dream of but with a sweet final line. chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
Yeah, Dean to the rescue but he got a kick in the gut for his trouble - guess Sam was totally out of it! Loved how he became aware and his first comment was whether Dean had smacked him!
Thru Terry's Eyes chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
Go Vanessa!
L5472 chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
Aww Sam... *hugs* SuperDean to the rescue. ]
sweetysmart0505 chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
He just smacked him. VERY FUNNY!
amyblair chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
Ha! That was poetic and funny and adorably sweet!
Enkidu07 chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
He did! he did smack him! And it was hysterical. Nice use of the challenge word and double points for sneaking in the word "shimmied." :)
InSecret chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
*snort* love it :)
sammygirl1963 chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
Oh how I would love to see this one tuned into a longer oneshot. It was awesome!
vonnie836 chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
Big brother to the rescue, getting kicked in the belly and slapping little bro to get him out of his nightmare. It sure was worth a giggle. Hugs, Vonnie
Dream Painter chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
All that trouble and that is the thanks he gets? LOL Nicely writ.
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