Reviews for Master Pickup Artist
yes chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
haha this was hilarious! I lold soooo much and not just because I like writing the three letters lol. I actually LOLd throughout the whole thing. Make another one for forget-me-not valley! Please? :)
No Longer Alive Hearts chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
No, that's wrong. It was funny, but I can't believe you violated a children's game like that.

Anyways, I'm working on a new project, maybe you'd like to check it out.
ffnetgoddess chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
Raising cocks? I can only assume the worst...

I starting reading this, and didn't realize it was you until later! You! My number one reviewer!

Anyway, really funny. I loved the doctor. I liked how he basically tortured Jack for messing with his girl. Why? BECAUSE HE'S JUST THAT AWESOME!

;-)
Smash Genesis chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
This was absolutely hysterical! Though I can't find anything really bad, I do believe that when Jack said "But hey five chic’s inns a hick town like this!" it seemed a little off. Try: "But, hey! Five chics inn a hick town!" I think that would be a little better.

I hope this helped!

SG
vollkommenheit chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
Haha, that was awesome, I really enjoyed it! Very clever