Reviews for Meditations on Natural Philosophy
Linnorria chapter 11 . 11/2/2010
This story makes me smile.

I love all the theorems Juno runs through during this. It makes her seem more real.
Xarhaa chapter 11 . 9/6/2010
Found this browsing the very limited selection of TFU fanfic available. Absolutely awesome, and thank you for assuming your readers are somewhat intelligent, it's really a breath of fresh air.

Do you plan on doing anything with TFU2 when it comes out? One can only wonder.

Again, awesome job.

- Xar
ClarkesLaw chapter 1 . 8/5/2010

Now, in this style, only Mass Effect.

...I'm just wondering, though: Why is the Empirical only accelerating at 1G? Thanks to the hand-waving powers of inertial dampening (And here every physicist grinds their teeth), SWU vehicles can puportedly accelerate at, like, 250G or something, without turning the crew into wallpaper.
Sing a Song 119 chapter 11 . 6/1/2010
Oh my gosh. I love this story. Every time I read it, I squeal with joy so loud that people ask me if I'm OK.

I really liked the tech speak. Even if I didn't understand some (most) of it, it added a... uniqueness? Mysteriousness? I don't know, exactly, but I really like the style you used and what you did with it.
Lisa Bell chapter 11 . 4/23/2010
I enjoyed that so much! Kudos!
Lisa Bell chapter 4 . 4/23/2010
I like your crazy math stuff. This is the only realistic and true to the story Force Unleashed fanfic. I've read. Good on you.
Doc Peasant chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Okay. Favourited. Not sure that's even a verb, but who cares. This story just drips awesomeness. The characters are, well, perfect, for lack of a better word. Best Juno here in ffnet, hands down. Hell, best Juno - ever. I'm such a sucker for strong female protagonists. So, thanks for this. :)

By the way, I wasn't put off by Juno's technical digressions, in fact I think they added so many wonderful layers to her character. I mean, that's just who she is. It made everything feel so *real*. I'm a sucker for science, too. If I may ask, do you have a background in engineering/physics? I guess it doesn't matter, eh. Thanks for the effort you put into this.

Great, I'm rambling now, so I'd better stop.
zer0123 chapter 11 . 2/20/2010
good story loved it
Code name Anrui Yuy chapter 11 . 2/1/2010
Wow, this story did not get nearly as many reviews as it should. Very well written, I especially love all the mathematics and chemistry you have Juno doing in her head, its exactly how I imagined the inside of her head being. And I know its not the ending from the game, but I like "'Singularity" best of the endings :)
uksanooj chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
An amazing take on the story. I really enjoyed your true-to-character portrayals of the 2 leads. I like how you managed to bring out her feelings without being too mushy (like in the game).

I have to say the so called canon ending is my favorite. None of the others just have the same emotional impact. But of course, with the Force Unleashed II, the effect diminishes a little :D
sdfghj chapter 2 . 1/8/2010
two things A: starkiller didn't have any scars when vader rebuilt him and B: juno didn't know starkiller's name untill after the adventure with the wookies.

just some helpful hints
DEACTIVATED-ACCOUNT404 chapter 11 . 8/29/2009
Oh my God. This story was beautiful. I loved the complexity of Juno and her thoughts - it was above me, sure, but that's why she's a genius, right? You really fleshed her out and made me care. And I'll tell you straight up - I'm currently crying. A lot. I read all the endings and I liked them all, but the sacrifice one was beautiful. Chapter 8 and 10 were absolutely incredible. My God. You nailed Galen's character, too, perfectly. This whole story was so real and tender and heartbreaking. I don't know how you did it, but you have talent, my friend, and you ought to get out there and at least write some serious Star Wars EU books. You're awesome.
lazyguy90 chapter 11 . 6/10/2009
Wow... This was a really good story, all three of the endings were excellent. Nicely done... Keep at it.
unlock.your.heart chapter 11 . 5/15/2009
Really good story, I liked all the endings but I'm a sucker for fluff so my favorite is the last one :)
QundraDraconum chapter 11 . 5/4/2009
I'm a hopeless romantic, so I prefer the third, no matter how improbable and unreal it is.
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