Reviews for Edge of Seventeen
Bella97 chapter 17 . 9/4
Why you people add rape stories in every fanfic its not a joke girl
iiCollz chapter 1 . 8/18/2016
Uh, it honestly annoyed me that since Jacob was wearing a rainbow anklet it instantly made him gay. I mean, sure, he is gay, but.. It's just irritating. Other than that, great chapter!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Add Vladimir and Stefan to it. Please
thatbitchcalledkharma chapter 21 . 7/26/2013
AWESOME! Such as unique story!
thatbitchcalledkharma chapter 18 . 7/25/2013
BTW, not hatin, just statin...but wasn't that the second time Emmett proposed to Rosalie? Awesome story btw.
Guest chapter 21 . 7/15/2013
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! :((((((( i love youso much for making this*(cries)*! Thank you thank you thank you thank you x 10000000 times more thank you! You need to start making books youre so good;))! Rate 11/10 such a good story! Much better than the original twilight hahahahahhaahah ;))) thank u once again! And if u have time ehmm i was reading the other thing u were writing about the hunger games about peeta and gale and finnick and all and you havent finished yet :O! So IF you time have im not saying u have to do it but i would very much appreciate it if u could start writing about it again! Cant wait for chapter 7 on it!
your fan forever_
lovingbites chapter 21 . 5/15/2013
I loved it so much Awe they suffered Thanks to that stupid James always causing problems then silly Bella
Anonymous chapter 21 . 4/28/2013
This story was brilliant!
BeautyKL chapter 21 . 4/21/2013
THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL! The love they have is the most amazing thing (': I loved it!
No longer of any concern chapter 15 . 4/17/2013
one question. why are they all so relaxed over the fact that Jacob has a major heart disease. I would be freaking out if I went months without even having a word with my doctor on when I'm getting a heart.
No longer of any concern chapter 14 . 4/17/2013
loved the chapter. just one thought tho, did the secret admirer remember to give the charger and guidebook for the smartphone on a later date. just me wondering about insignificant things as always... sigh
No longer of any concern chapter 2 . 4/17/2013
My mother and father gave me a internet connection and told me to Google 'it'. I think they where planning on giving me the talk, unfortunately they found out I prefer that lifestyle that is both fabulous and alternative, they seem to keep me at a distance... why can't I have a sister like Rachel? sigh my life is boring... can't wait to finish this great work of yours. I've enjoyed it immensely so far.
Ennah1887 chapter 21 . 1/5/2013
I loved it.
just me chapter 19 . 1/4/2013
Ok, dude... I've been trying not to comment on the story. Don't get me wrong, its a great story and all but some things just put me off. 1st of all, what really annoyed me/gave me a great laugh, was in one of the previous chapters where you confused "portrait" with "postrate" - its important you get that one right. 2ndly, your spelling is horrible I'm sorry to say, as well as your grammer and punctuation. Last (but not least), you need to make sure you get your homophones and homonymes correct. There's a HUGE difference between "to" and "too", "their" and "they're", "of" and "off". Oh! And I think your story has too much plot from the original books. What I would like to know is... WHAT THE HELL IS YOUR BETA DOING?
Jaine1324 chapter 21 . 8/7/2012
Omg this is amazing, I completely love this story. Brilliant fic!
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