Reviews for Finding the Leader
UnluckyWriter chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
awesome fic! )
rachel-serene chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
Oh Loved short and a lot is left to be understood ,But if you can't do that then why read AU,mafia/suspense...I love it when the writers leaves some things to the imagination of readers.

Tyka Flirting is one of the best things you can read and you got that so in place.

["Their innocent kisses always turned into not-so-innocent acts almost immediately"] now that is one of the things what i am talking about...Great work...Keep writing.
bb-s chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
A bit confuse but I guess Kai is really the boss right?
sayuri2023 chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
I wish you would have expanded the story, neverthless, it was cute!
ZombieBlinky chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
Ah, so was Kai the leader of the bladebreakers? Or did he just shoot Yuriy to cover up for Takao? o.O