|Reviews for Eight Hearts Intertwined|
| PearlyWirly1 chapter 3 . 1/4/2011
i'm starting to like this plz update its getting really gd!
| MVII chapter 8 . 4/15/2009
Chill. This isn't a flame. I'll just say things that I find in your story... a bit repulsive, and please don't take this personally.
One: your OCs seem like Sues. I don't know how to say this really. But OCs from America (they are from America, right? I forget)... or other places are Sues waiting to be called on. They don't really fit in with the story.
Two: Some characters seem too OOC, but not too much. Maybe they should change or something if they like someone but it's too... sudden.
Your grammar and punctuation are okay, so I compliment you on that. ('Teka muna' means 'wait a minute' so you're a Filipino too, right? That's cool! I'm a Filipino too!)
| rebekahalana chapter 6 . 1/16/2009
Happy pills ? I'm not so sure I should feed your addiction ... ;)
This is very interesting and you have me curious as to what Cure Sensei is planning - he has to be up to something ...
| mpc797 chapter 6 . 1/16/2009
I like the story, keep it up, just wondering what faking means?
| 7colornotebook chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
I hate you...so...much...*Death Glare! AAHH!*
Wah you meanie :((
So you WERE serious when you said you'd post this...!
GAH! IT'S TSUKIHIME ALL OVER AGAIN! (Cheater.) xD
*runs to mon*
MOMMY! SHE'S BEING MEAN! WAH! GIVE HER A TIME OUT!
Dude, Mira's the name of my grandma...and Monica? Now i'm going to think of Monca whenever I read Moka parts O.o
| kataiookami chapter 2 . 12/5/2008
Bernice V. told me abt this...YOU REALLY POSTED IT?
Anyways it's nice and all but...RxR really means Read and Reveiw!
-You know who I am *ahem*reggie*ahem*
| BlackCat 2468 chapter 2 . 12/1/2008
really good can't wait to read more of the story.