Reviews for The Land That Is Not
barthur0717 chapter 17 . 9/13/2016
Guest chapter 16 . 9/12/2016
So Jareth's mother is Ariadne? Who conquered the Labyrinth with a ball of thread. This is a terrific story. But you make the most egregious mistakes in English, simple, dumb ones that your beta does not catch. Is English the native language of both of you?
Guest chapter 8 . 9/12/2016
And she doesn't immediately recognize the name Itys and its association with Tereus and Procne? That's hardly believable.
Honoria Granger chapter 16 . 8/3/2014
Jareth is Ariadne's son!? Wow, there's a twist. So is Theseus or Dionysus his dad? This is great!
Honoria Granger chapter 15 . 8/3/2014
I love how you're working the story of Ariadne, Dionysus, Phaedra and Theseus into this...
Honoria Granger chapter 8 . 8/2/2014
Itys, eh? Could it be that someone wished Hoopoe's son away long ago? Getting very interesting!
Honoria Granger chapter 4 . 8/2/2014
Wow, powerful stuff! You should be careful when writing about magic, though, lest you inadvertently write something real. This seems okay, though...even though it seems to have summoned Mercury himself, god of writers...
Honoria Granger chapter 3 . 8/2/2014
Great conflict setting up. Well done indeed.
Honoria Granger chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
Very nice, and nicely drawn, beginning. I am looking forward to see where you take this.
Cris Coursey chapter 15 . 1/4/2012
I was enjoying your story and I am dissappointed there's no conclusion. Do you plan one, because it is a wonderful story not to have one.
Labyrinth Addict chapter 15 . 11/11/2011
I really hope you cotinue this story, i can't wait to see how it turns out.
msjuliett chapter 15 . 5/27/2011
sooo good yet soooo not finished

please please please come back to this story

livrainbow chapter 15 . 2/13/2011
more omg i love it
Marie-Karma chapter 15 . 2/3/2011
Why, I surely do wait for you to continue the story soon enough.

A very good one indeed, added to my favourites :D

Ginabella59 chapter 15 . 11/3/2010
Good chapter again but I'm really sad that you didn't update long time ago. I hope you just take a break and not leave this story.

I wonder why you dont have much review because this story is really good and very well written.
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