Reviews for The Eternal Chimera
Nihatclodra chapter 23 . 7/16
4 and a half years...yup, this is abandoned alright... damn.
Nihatclodra chapter 22 . 7/16
Karin's Blood? But didn't Kushina's letter states how the Phoenix "water" can not be stored for any significant amount of time and still be effective?
Nihatclodra chapter 21 . 7/16
You mentioned before that they need all the rings to extract the bijuu, which is why they wanted the one Orochimaru had so much... how do they plan to extract Gaara's without Hidan and Kakuzu's rings?
Nihatclodra chapter 9 . 7/15
Something just occurred to me; When Naruto dies and is reborn in super-hot fire: wouldn't all his clothing burn off?

Also, since it appears you are planning on pairing Naruto with a mortal; wouldn't that mean that he would permanently die alongside her when his mortal lover does in fact die? After all, Kushina perma-died before reaching old age due to the bond, so there's literally no reason to think the same wouldn't happen to Naruto...
Nihatclodra chapter 7 . 7/15
Something just occurred to me... Kushina would now be part of the Phoenix Contract, right? And not only that; wouldn't said contract also rend the "Mutual Death Marriage Bond" kind of pointless since Minato isn't a phoenix thus leaving Kushina alone as part of the contract?
Guest chapter 2 . 2/14
You seem to put random commas in places they're not needed.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2015
More than one girl is a harem so yes your fic is like every other God dam retarded naruto fic on this site!
Blazingwaffle chapter 23 . 12/18/2015
Very good story hope to see more
Crusade chapter 3 . 12/13/2015
Okay there a couple reasons why this story makes no sense.
1:naruto is way too much of an idiot.
2: with kakashi as a teacher he would surely be able to take down a chuunin, kakashi did it when he was five god dammit.
3: there is no way kakashi would have waited 7 years to teach naruto the kage bunshin, naruto has the nine tails plus he is an uzumaki which means his chakra is fucking huge, which kakashi knew from the time he made naruto awaken his chakra.
4: be course kakashi adobted naruto there is no limit or rules to what he can teach him, just like the clans teach their children all sorts of jutsus and taijutsu styles, kakashi would have done the same for naruto so that makes no sense why he would stick to the mission that he got from the hokage...
5: with kakashi as a teacher there is no way that naruto would be that bad at acedemics...
I mean comon, kakashi graduated when he was five, how can he not make naruto good at it 7 god damn years...
6: and last, with kakashi as a teacher there is no way that the only reason naruto wins against sasuke is be course he doesnt give up.. Comon this is supposed to be strong naruto fiction.. Not the same god damn naruto that always win be course he doesnt know when to give up..
Guest chapter 3 . 12/11/2015
from what i have read so far i can tell this fic is filled with cliches like his parents die and the villagers hurting him and the really ruin a good thing and minato would not have killed himself if his wife were to die to so i must say this fic must be pulled down or at the lest rewritten
MECHANICALCHEESE chapter 8 . 11/3/2015
So... please answer this if you can, but am I correct in assuming that you wanted to pair Naruto with a Mortal so that his immortality becomes unnecessary?

It's pretty pointless for Kami to send Rei to accompany Naruto for the end of time if all he does is squander it by bonding his soul with a mortal and dying anyway when she dies.

Lamest 'power' and decision-making ever. It makes no sense. Reincarnated is going to be bonded to this as well, so she will also die, and it will all be Haku's fault, even if she couldn't prevent her eventually death...

Unless you give Haku plot armor and awas to be immortal as well, then Naruto and Reincarnated are already destined to die. It's just so lame... give your characters amazing powers and no means to ever use them, just... laaaaame.
MECHANICALCHEESE chapter 6 . 11/3/2015
I wondering if Haku feels guilty for knocking Naruto out in the first place, resulting in his 'death'. How can she be upset with him dying when he had NO control whatsoever?
Guy sensei chapter 2 . 10/17/2015
This was funny and pretty good
lianis180 chapter 3 . 7/29/2015
OK I was not expecting for naruto to be immortal...
..I LIVE IT ~_~
Shadowstar King chapter 23 . 7/20/2015
4 years have passed and I am still waiting for another chapter :D
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