|Reviews for Two Different People In Love|
| Slothspieller chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
Considering that this is supposedly a T-rated story, what was described seemed awfully graphic and seems to be swiftly headed in the "lemon" direction. Don't take this as harsh criticism, but please reconsider the rating you chose for your story because the content seemed a bit too explicit for the T-level rating.