Reviews for The Third One Between
1tinac chapter 1 . 1/2
I wish I had a Jake
sarahmicaela88 chapter 1 . 12/27/2016
This so cute.
April-Showers82 chapter 1 . 12/27/2016
I love this! Please continue, if you're still interested. You had so many things in here that were awesome like Jacob didn't bring out the best in her, but forced her to bring it out of herself. That's a great idea!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
Jake is soooooooooooooooo screwed
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
No Bellas heart only stopos for deasd things. Poor kid, Poor Jake. Maybe he gets lucky and she dies..
What an asshole she is
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
I soo hate Bella. I love the few fics where Jake has had enough. Tells her to pound sand (twice)
Her heart only stops for dead things I guess. Too bad it didnt stop permanently!
Then Jake could find someone worthy of him...and that sure aint Bella.
Seems jake just cant catch a break.

Anyway well done, I just never find Bella terribly sympathetic.
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
I am so happy for them and so love this little story. I see you wrote it a long time ago, if you are still at this site it must be cool to see that people still read and enjoy your work. This was sweet and perfect as we know Bella and Jake. Thanks for writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Soo good
grempler1 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
So sweet. So beautiful. You have a tremendous talent for capturing and relating emotions.
j.d.y chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Cute
ColourMeChaos chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
You're just too amazing.
BrookeBelikov chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Cute as story!
timotei chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
That's sweet. :)

Keep up the great work. :D

x
Artemis1000 chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
This fic just made me melt in a puddle of "awwww"ing happy goo with the sheer cuteness of it.
san potter chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
awww so cute
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