|Reviews for Dark Sonata|
| myheartstillbleedsforyou chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!
Lol, Koro is a little too happy huh?
But no worries! I am not angry. I am very happeh!
| Red Roses2 chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
This is promising! Especially the weird character in the duffle bag. I love how Roji is being nice to them, but is still cautious of them. The clairvoyant doesn't really act blind, though. . . . I assume you'll be explaining that in a later chapter.
The writing style is a little passive, but I don't think there's anything really wrong with that. Plenty of good fiction has been written in passive voice. Just put some active voice, and you'll be good.
I'm interested in finding out exactly what Koro and Eiji will be to Roji and Muhyo. Friends? Enemies? Annoying but useful helpers? I'll be looking forward to your next post! :)