|Reviews for Spore Tales: City era|
| Bellossom Ranger chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
This fanfic grabbed me at the beginning with its own telling of the cinemas that play between the end of the Tribal Stage and beginning of the Civilization stage; I didn't think to do something like that with my own (unpublished) story!
Is your race an actual species you're playing? I'd like authors of these fics to put up links to their Spore Page, it would help us visualize the characters better.
A Civilzation Stage fanfic, to me, is the hardest to write(next to Cell Stage, which is impossible due to the lack of things going on) because the whole thing is linear to the nth degree - capture spice geysers, build vehicles, capture cities, take over the world. The way you write this - having three leaders instead of one - makes the whole thing more plot-heavy than I could do. Great job.
| SirHenryMF chapter 2 . 3/17/2009
Liking it so far
| some fella1 chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
After reading your story, it would be impossible to say that i didn't enjoy your writing style. I particually liked the breif 'log enteries' that you made in this chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter!