Welcome to the real world.

I enjoyed it...though I wouldn't have minded them getting caught by 'cyber crimes' for their hacking...

I agree w/ 'Guest', the reviewer Saissa does seem to hate Tony, and by association, your story. I truly don't understand why some people feel they have the right to badger a writer simply because the story isn't what they want to read. Thing is, if someone left repeated negative reviews on one story, he/she has likely badgered/bullied other writers as well. Personally, I'm a Tony fan, but I've read Tim-centric stories as well. If I truly didn't like what I was reading, I just hit the back button. I mean, what's the point of hating on a story or writer? It's not like they're going to all of a sudden change the direction of their story. (Sigh)

Just wanted to comment on that; I've seen a lot of 'bullying' in this fandom. I usually read in another one, and such reviews are really rare there.

Kate - worst profiler ever...Ari had 'kind eyes' ?! It's no wonder she's got Tony totally wrong.

If they're digging in Tony's file, they'll do it again to someone else, unless there are consequences. And Kate was already fired from the Secret Service, so she should be extra careful about her behavior and antics. Her judgment is questionable, at best.

I can only hope they learn a few things, enough to turn around their lack of respect for Tony. I can also hope that they actually get in trouble for hacking into his personnel file. Anywhere I've ever worked, those are considered highly private and confidential.

loved it more please

Great story! :-)

You know Tim cleared the computer when he turned it off so no one would see that they had excessed someone's files. If Tony was so dumb when it comes to computers then why could he pull up what was last excessed on it after hitting just a few keys. That tells you he knows a lot more that he lets on

nice

interesting start hmm.

Love it. I always love Tony and awesome he is. Even if it's fake or it hides his real awesomeness. Yay and boos to both Kate and McGee. Btw, I do wonder, in the earlier chapters with Palmer being mentioned on the phone with the Legal Department, is it some kind of hint for Palmer x Lee?

Love it everytime I read it.:)

Thank you.

I really loved the whole story, especially the last chapter

Wow this saissa person doesn't seem to like tony or this story very much. Constructive Critisism is one thing but wow that's just questioning the layout of this story and the characters ,just wow I for one liked the story and the teams individual thoughts about what was happening cool story I've always loved the rather odd relationship the team have

Yep - Tony hasn't changed a scrap - and as soon as he is back the bullying and hazing starts up again.

So what will Kate anmd McGee do? nothing as usual.

what did I think? I think Tony is one big huge hypocrite.

He hates for anyone else to be going through HIS personnel file, and yet he is always trying to invade McGees and Kates privacy, asking them personal questions, rifling through their desks, drawers, backpacks, bags and trash bins looking for anything he can use to make fun of McGee and Kate,

HYPOCRITE!