Reviews for Will You Hold Me Up If I Start To Fall?
ana-db chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
OKEII, I GUESS IT WAS GOOD.. WELL I MEAN I LIKED IT AND ALL BUT THEY JUST KISSED AND THEY ARE ALREADY DECLARING THEIR LOVE? HOW DOES THAT WORK EXACTLY? WELL, YOU DONT HAVE TO ANSWER ME ITS JUST THAT THAT KINDA CAUGHT ME OFF GUARD I SUPPOSE BUT WHATEVA!
Subvert Normality chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
HUGE PARAGRAPHS O_O

but it was cute, considering the fact that you have to read transference now :D
Josefina Newton chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
WHO CUTE! GO FAX! Yes, you told me to review, so I will! :) I still think you should do Figgy. If you do, I'll suscribe to you! GEH DO FIGGY! AND MORE FAX I LUV THIS
Ninja.Melting.Hydrogen chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
kwl :) real good
VOLVO S60R chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
ok, this is just a pet peave of mine. when you are writing diologe you start a new parigraph.

example

"blaw blaw blaw." said Fang

"yappidee yap yap" replied Max.
MaXiMuMrIDEisThEbeSTBoOkeVeR chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
aw, how sweet. I don't think you should continue though, it is perfect as a one-shot. I think that you did an excellent job. I haven't read many fanfictions with the Valentines Day topic, and this one was very,very good.