Reviews for Thirty Minutes
L chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
very beautiful but sad writing. i love your kakasaku works. strawberry gashes was beautifully written too. you showed the emotion very well in both stories, and in strawberry gashes, ino's point of view made me cry. continue writing, you have a gift at showing emotions and telling a story. :D peace out

-L
ChasingProse chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
This I like. It reminds me of the song 30 Minutes by Tatu. Any correlation?
fauxPROJECT chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
you wrote this amazingly :D

i liked the format especially
scarecrow's girl chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
awesome as always! :) i love how descriptive you are! sorry, am i being a stalker? lol!
KanataH chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
so kakashi loved her but pushed her away? why?

i think it's great.