Reviews for Electricity
amyh52 chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Ewww I would be so mad about those cookies!
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
'At least the cookie is saved.' LOL Casey

Damn those lights! I would like to see how far the battle would have progressed ;D

Great idea, very fitting title to the concept D
Avide chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
My only issue is that I feel there should be a new chapter with each change of POV.
Sorceress of Magic chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
haha nicee cuteness
Allybooklover6677 chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
I loved the plot and the entire story! It was really good and iteresting, I love the battle/war dialouge, that was cute, and the kissing was hot.
atouchofDASEY chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
shiit that was hot.
Wepluvzyou chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
loved it!
TwilightxxLuver chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
i loved this chapter it was great...i hopr the next chapter is as good as this one...i cant wait to read the next chapter...UPDATE SOON!
VampireDesire chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
Damn this is good!

you should make sequel or something hahaha. love it!
pinkstarpatricia chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
i love it! very very nice!
Lanter chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
Hot and in character, great job.
Zuzzeroo chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
i love it! ah! i loved the whole thing! it was really well written and i want it to me more than just a one-shot. lol. amazing job. damn amazing job, lol.

xoxoTaraxoxo
sbxfan chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
wow great job. more please!
Trissacar chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
o0o0o0o! LOL!
Frogster chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
Fantastic! Especially loved your summary-GREAT lead-in. Loved the last few lines too. And, of course, love me some Dasey.

Update soon!
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