|Reviews for Electricity|
| amyh52 chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Ewww I would be so mad about those cookies!
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
'At least the cookie is saved.' LOL Casey
Damn those lights! I would like to see how far the battle would have progressed ;D
Great idea, very fitting title to the concept D
| Angie Tribeca chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
My only issue is that I feel there should be a new chapter with each change of POV.
| Sorceress of Magic chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
haha nicee cuteness
| letmeoffoffanfictionplease chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
I loved the plot and the entire story! It was really good and iteresting, I love the battle/war dialouge, that was cute, and the kissing was hot.
| atouchofDASEY chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
shiit that was hot.
| Wepluvzyou chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
| TwilightxxLuver chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
i loved this chapter it was great...i hopr the next chapter is as good as this one...i cant wait to read the next chapter...UPDATE SOON!
| VampireDesire chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
Damn this is good!
you should make sequel or something hahaha. love it!
| pinkstarpatricia chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
i love it! very very nice!
| Lanter chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
Hot and in character, great job.
| Zuzzeroo chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
i love it! ah! i loved the whole thing! it was really well written and i want it to me more than just a one-shot. lol. amazing job. damn amazing job, lol.
| sbxfan chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
wow great job. more please!
| Trissacar chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
| Frogster chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
Fantastic! Especially loved your summary-GREAT lead-in. Loved the last few lines too. And, of course, love me some Dasey.