Reviews for Konoha: Naruto's Playground
Satan chapter 33 . 2/11
That was a good chuckle
Tepheris chapter 3 . 2/1
Funny. There, happy now?
Poland-lover chapter 8 . 1/14
Oh come on did you really have to add tenten to the mix
gr8b8m8 chapter 3 . 1/8
u gud
Guest chapter 6 . 1/2
Eh... Still boring...
Guest chapter 5 . 1/2
Yawn
Next chapter makes or heals the reading experience for me...
Guest chapter 4 . 1/2
Umm no, I know this is fanfic and all but no, Naruto's body would have reroute all chakra to the wound in any case instead of pushing it out the pores. And even if it didn't, the jutsu would cease because something like it it requires a constant conscious effort.
TheNineTailedNinja chapter 11 . 12/2/2017
The "breakup" as you call it felt way too rushed. I can understand the jealousy, but you didn't make it feel believable.
Arbor vitae chapter 1 . 11/21/2017
Killing all the fish in the pond seems like a bad idea.
Guest chapter 8 . 11/16/2017
Seriously, are there no repercussions for using Naruto? Yeah they almost lost him but THAT'S THE POINT. The Hokage should have never gotten his trust back. Yeah, Naruto may be a little sad if he died, and I could handle it if Naruto was faking it...but this is bull-hockey. He was almost Gaara-level insane and with just a mention-NO NAMING STILL MIND YOU-of his parents supposedly trusting Hiruzen, a breakdown, and a hug...and all is well. No. I cannot read this any longer. It does not address the HUGE problem. Good day.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/16/2017
No. Sarutobi doesn't GET to be redeemed. No.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/16/2017
Fuck the Hokage. I hope Naruto gives you hell, steals everything, and goes friggin rogue.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/16/2017
INU
SilverQueen08 chapter 1 . 11/4/2017
Man, this chapter got me hooked! To be blunt, I got bored while reading the first part but THIS is awesome! Kudos to you, my friend.
Shury-ken chapter 52 . 10/28/2017
You seriously know how to write. It was awesome and I was totally hooked. I hope you'll complete the sequel soon.!
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