Reviews for Sunshine State
ninny 1 chapter 12 . 9/29/2020
Very good
Kageyjay chapter 12 . 8/23/2018
This trip was something so different for Edward to deal with, out of his "comfort zone." He actually had to BE a teenage boy trying to impress on Bella's Mom, and Phil, that he was right for her. I liked being able to see what was happening with Edward while Bella was enjoying her time with Renee. They did learn things about each other that made them better together.
Kageyjay chapter 3 . 8/23/2018
I like Bella being able to be so close, but just a bit too far for Edward. I like what he said about her playing a child's game but being a woman at the same time.
ilovedobermans chapter 7 . 2/18/2018
I'm glad to read about Renee's thoughts. She's a
pretty unknown character.
cjj chapter 12 . 8/15/2016
beautiful story, amazing writing skills/insight, great vocabulary and beautiful meaningful dialogues. thank you for sharing your thoughts/story with us. I would say/think that 90% of this likely to happen. -)
belwardgl chapter 12 . 2/17/2016
I loved it!
Amanda Solheim chapter 12 . 12/28/2015
I was going to have this eloquent paragraph, of how well written, touching, and emotionally satisfying your story is. But the last chapter, along with your author's note, has left me speachless. Thank you so much for this. I can'tell wait to read it again. 3
Bella3000 chapter 4 . 8/16/2015
Great chapter! Loved it! :D
divyvicki chapter 12 . 7/19/2015
I did like this story. I loved the concept. I must admit though I really thought Edward was going to tell Bella about Victoria.
divyvicki chapter 11 . 7/19/2015
That darn paper gets in the way of everything.
divyvicki chapter 10 . 7/19/2015
I bet Alice and Edward did have difficulty communicating when he was in Florida. Good job pointing that out.
divyvicki chapter 9 . 7/19/2015
Sweet ending to that chapter.
divyvicki chapter 8 . 7/19/2015
What a wonderful interaction.
divyvicki chapter 7 . 7/19/2015
Interesting insight from Renee.
divyvicki chapter 6 . 7/19/2015
Glad Renee is being supportive.
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