Reviews for Restricted
Soraslove chapter 10 . 11/4/2020
well, maybe hermione will change tom.
Soraslove chapter 1 . 11/3/2020
Uh oh, hermione found the dark lord, voldy shorts.
marinarathesauce chapter 16 . 10/12/2020
Nice fic!
Alaine chapter 16 . 8/28/2020
Not bad...pretty story
Hello.lovelies chapter 16 . 6/16/2020
Love it. So cute
diamondnightskies chapter 16 . 9/30/2019
Very interesting take on the time travel thing, definitely a strange and surprising ending. But I really liked the story. I understand kind of what you meant about the next to last chapter, it was probably my least favorite chapter if I had to be picky. Not all of it, some of it I quite liked. I guess it's one of those things where every writer how to figure out how much to change Tom, how much to change canon, and still make a relationship and acceptance believable. I love that he put that ring back on her finger. That was an awesome touch.
alannalove1990 chapter 16 . 8/31/2019
Love love love!
ppphps chapter 16 . 6/18/2019
End already? Too fast! I still want to read more. Your writing is fantastic!
sunshine.katz chapter 16 . 1/22/2019
Thoroughly enjoyed this (I was sad for Dumbledore but being reborn as a phoenix is pretty exciting).
SaltWaterSwimmer29 chapter 16 . 11/25/2018
Really interesting story! I loved all the twists and turns. Great job!
Wanderer's Cynefin chapter 16 . 9/9/2018
I don't know how it happened but I managed to read this whole fic in one go. It's been a long time since I found some story worth doing that but yours was simply so interesting and good and had me hooked that I couldn't put this stupid phone down to take a break XD

I loved this story. Some moments like the first time Tom jumped in Hermione's time and how she landed in the prefect's bathroom ("I was reading the book." "In the bathroom?") were really awesome and sweet with just the right touch of amusement. Also I loved the theory of Dumbledore being the phoenix at the end - the reason you gave was convincing as well as in sync with the book.
But most of all, the conversations and your portrayal of Tom Riddle is what that's sending this story in my favorite list.

PS: you're responsible that I'm now behind on homework that's due tomorrow XD
roveme chapter 16 . 8/31/2018
Actually I didn't quite like this fic or precisely Hermione. She looks so selfish, gullible and foolish. She goes back and accepts chocolate from "voldemort" and then after death threat she continues after a lame apology. Really she looks more like a doormat than ever. Ahead of knowing that voldemort was a master legilimens she doesn't learned occlumency inspite of having time to learn it. Instead of going to Dumbledore she makes a deal with a manipulator who gives death threats to her like breathing air, stupid much? But this is not all, she becomes "weak in the knees" also at seeing him and he humilates her by showing off their relationship to her friends. Oh so its just another fic showing superiority of Tom Riddle on Hermione and their sweet abusive relationship... Disappointing. All's well as it ends well as tom will not break his promise or manipulate to go in the dark way in the future, yeah?
JD SPARKS chapter 16 . 8/27/2018
Omg. Phoenix-Dumbledore...that's brilliant! Haha I love that they coerced him into swearing off all his ambitions. Well at least the evil ones... So how ded Bella go. Slowly or would Tom baby killing is totally fine have offed her at birth lol. Maybe he could have made it look like an accident. Sorry I really dislike Bellatrix can you tell? Hahahahah. Great story, thank you for writing and sharing! I'll be keeping an eye out for your other works since it sounds like you write a lot of Tomione!
JD SPARKS chapter 15 . 8/27/2018
Aww I love that he I'd change slightly... Ughh Ron, who is suspiciously quiet about killing his friend!
JD SPARKS chapter 13 . 8/26/2018
Whoa, this is going off the rails on a crazy train, and I love it! Wild ride for sure. I really wish Hermione said yes to Tom's question to dispose of Bellatrix...okay maybe just a little nod.. Hahaha.
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