Reviews for Restricted
The Dark One Rising chapter 16 . 5/31/2014
I need to quote this one day:

"I'm really sorry about the whole almost killing you thing."

It took me 10 chapters to realize I had already read this. It seems I've read a few of your stories at some point. I wonder what else of yours I've read. I guess I'll just have to read them and find out.
Eylia Riddle chapter 16 . 5/20/2014
The story was amazing! I really loved it! You're such a good writer. Maybe i go read some of your other stories.
Kim chapter 16 . 4/30/2014
This was such an amazing story. It was so unique and the characters stayed real. I adored it!
ohmygodricgirl chapter 16 . 4/7/2014
This is one of the most flippin magnificent fics I've. ever read. You wrote all the characters beautifully.
JasperWhitlockIsTheStud chapter 16 . 4/5/2014
I immensely enjoyed this tale! It was so bloody good!

Frankly, Tom didn't seem as OOC as one would think but like seeing a more humane side and the way the two brilliant students of Hogwarts albeit the 50 years gap fell for each other was a lovely read!

I especially like the subtle way of you telling their consummation as well. (It's T after all). I liked the happy ending and was laughing at the way Harry/Tom interacted. This would be like the happy version of HP for sure!

Thanks for the lovely read xo
MadHatterx12 chapter 12 . 3/30/2014
I'm FAN of your works... It's just... it's my favourite tomione fanfiction in the whole world of fanfics!
Rosaroma chapter 16 . 3/27/2014
I finished this in a matter of hours. Kudos for a humorous, fast paced story. I like your Riddle, he comes across as much more alive than I expected.
Rosaroma chapter 8 . 3/27/2014
This is bizarre, but not in a bad way! That parting scene was really cute, in a Tom Riddle kind of way.
Rosaroma chapter 6 . 3/27/2014
Intriguing and I'd write something more fluid if it wasn't so late. I like it.
Rosaroma chapter 4 . 3/27/2014
Haha this is quite amusing.
Rosaroma chapter 3 . 3/27/2014
I'm curious where this is going, another great chapter.
Rosaroma chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
I like that you dove straight in, a slow start can be good but I enjoy the pace this has begun with.
BelleinWonderland chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
Currently rereading a few chapters (yes, I liked it that much lol) and again I want to say I really enjoyed your version of Tom Riddle. When I said you kept him very much in character, I meant that he still felt like Tom even though he's not entirely horrible in this fic. ;)
BelleinWonderland chapter 16 . 3/22/2014
Very good story. I really enjoyed the slow progression of the friendship/romance between Tom/Hermione. I also liked how you made them both travel between time lines- very original compared to other time travel fics. But to be honest, I wasn't satisfied with the ending. I would've preferred for her to have stayed in the 40s with Tom, fuck all and change history.

And while I realize this is an AU/crackship/fanfiction, I did feel that Harry and Ginny were very OOC to me in the last 2 chapters. Harry, especially. He would never be so chill about Hermione falling in love with the man who murdered his parents. And he certainly wouldn't be able to remain so calm while in Tom's presence.

But hey, it's not too bad. Granted I generally hate OOCness, but it didn't take away from the enjoyment of the story here. I really like the way you wrote Tom- very in character imo. All around it was a very interesting and well written fic. :)
XxXSmiles101XxX chapter 16 . 3/2/2014
Aww sweet and amazing, I love it. Well done :)
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