Reviews for A Foxes Tale
tylor13roney chapter 15 . 9/30
making ororchimaru so stupid.

is. lame.

he literally sent his 3 in charge to assinate naruto yet his target is alive and she is missing yet he is still going into the trap.

unless later in the story i find he has more plans then im out too many people make naruto smarter and forgive the villlage while save the villagers and all konoha become smarter to.

i bet pein will trip and fall and die when he gets news on how op naruto is and how konoha became so smart and stronger while everyone else is stupider then sakura affection for sasuke
ashishroy.akr08 chapter 38 . 7/29
twists after twists.. eagerly waiting for the update
K1B4ND chapter 35 . 7/22
i'm a dumbass, i re-read again. You said secret technique , sorry.
K1B4ND chapter 35 . 7/22
Err... When you say the blood clone technique isn't just a forbidden jutsu but a kinjutsu, it literally means the same. kinjutsu means forbidden technique.
Sahamosveb chapter 12 . 7/17
"Am i the only one who SAW(?!) what he just SAID(?!Really, dude?
Sahamosveb chapter 6 . 7/17
This fanfic is so bad that it's even good. The dialog is naive. The plot is cringe-worthy. The characters are not alive, but cardboard dolls. I'm not even talking about "breaking an oath on hitai-ate equals treason" it's so dumb and unrealistic that it's even funny. I feel like the author was 14 years old when he started writing this, and the point of this fanfic was to describe his fantasies about "If I were Naruto I would want...".
wasseckb79 chapter 38 . 7/16
W.T.F. did the Jubi come from?
They only have 7 of the 9 beasts needed.
You have some explaining to do.
hunter616.17 chapter 38 . 7/15
Can you post more chapters of this
ElementalMaster16 chapter 38 . 7/15
Awesome chapter!
marioluciosemedo chapter 38 . 7/15
The Yomi technique reminds me of Bo the Penance Stare and the similar technique that is used by Spawn (Al Simons)
Is good to see the plant techniques again but it brings the question Naruto's demon and Hanyo transformations?
Also when will the Inuyasha gang finally get a new scene? Will they still visit the Elemental Nations?
Krieger Techpreist chapter 38 . 7/14
Well fuck
VFSNAKE chapter 38 . 7/14
Awesome. One evil Uchiha down. One crippled. One more to go.
buterflypuss chapter 38 . 7/14
good chap
Zero4590 chapter 9 . 7/11
Continued from previous chapter. I don't consider Zangetsu to be one of the cooler Zanpakutō. It is cool just not as visually stunning like Senbonsakura or Hyorinmaru
Zero4590 chapter 8 . 7/11
Why does everyone insist on using Benihime. There are so many cooler Zanpakutō. No I don't fondid
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