|Reviews for With Great Restraint|
| ChieriAn9eL chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
I'm astounded by your work once again...First light is still one of my favorite BD alternatives ;)
What an amusing and interesting parallel to Jacob and Bella's converstaion. Good job telling it from Edward's POV and keeping it true-to-character and story :)
| jueguini chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
wow! you described very well edward's worries! good job! :)
| Indredi chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
So much fun, nicely done! Again, I'm amazed at how well you write Edward's mind reading ability- the way he "hears" multiple conversations at once while holding another... Must be terribly hard to write! Especially and keep it completely readable, as you do. Hurrah!
| Just Another Phase chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
WOW! I really like your stories. This was fantastic! I really missed those endearing Edward moments in Breaking Dawn and you have brought them to life masterfully for me. Very excellent writing...
| Eebee chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
I love you writing style and your insight into Edward is remarkable - this has inspired me to read more of your stories.
| Lady Dragona chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
I love reading your stories from Edward's perspective. I so look forward to SM finishing MS. I think that you do a wonderful job capturing him.
| Juliejuliejulie chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
I love that Edward asks Tanya for advice on sex. That's so perfect!
| ForEverTopaz1901 chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
I loved this! It is very much like the mind of Edward.
| azure0610 chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
Write Tanya's pov from her first time seeing Bella. I wish someone would write that. Tanya being so into Edward, what WAS she thinking when she first saw her at the wedding
| lanicker chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
You are so good at telling Edwards side of things!
| MFLuder42 chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Very realistic to how I would imagine Edward's thoughts to be. Nice job!
| PiecesOfSerendipity chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Very good - love it!
Also fits in well with the story!
| Julsgracie chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
Your Edward is exactly right!
| windfalling chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
I love it.
| AnkouBlake chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
This was very good, very real. Well done