|Reviews for Chronicles of Narnia: Ram The Great|
| Ralph Brew chapter 1 . 6/21
It is a good story that could be revised don't you think? Reduce the numbers of Calormenes, attacking, don't call them savages, explain some background politics (remember Rabadash would be in power by now and he left Narnia and Archenland alone after his first messy attempt.), so someone else must have it in for Archenland. Also Ram probably would not be called Great until much later in life. I was also surprised that Ram wouldn't have been familiar with some of the magical half human beasts of Narnia. Surely he would be old enough and well taught enough to know about and have met some of them. And what were Peter and Edmund still doing about?
| Shayna chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
| Shadowwolf chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
hey i think this is pretty cool. not many people notice ram the great from the book, The Horse and His Boy. but i'm kinda confused, because it said that Cor was better in battle than Corin, while Corin was good at boxing...so shudnt Corin be the one lyk in more danger?
| SpangleyPony chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
nice little story and very good considering how old you were when you wrote it :)