Reviews for Quiet Rage
jk chapter 17 . 4/4
You have bella acting like a woman that has been abused for months.
She has bile raising in her throat when he touches her, she shakes at the mention of his name.
She doesn't want to be around him at all. Shes placating him, as if hes been abusive for ever.
He got mad a couple times and lashed out...and you have bella acting like he acts like that a lot.
She is best friends with this guy...she dated him...she agreed to marry him and he gets mad and lashes out acouple times and she throws in the fucking towel just like that? He not you average woman beater ya know? first off he didn't even HIT her...just saying...and hes a fucking alpha werewolf!
Id be pissed to if my WIFE wouldn't consummate our marriage and was still trying to whore it up with her ex boyfriend...who happens to be my mortal enemy...and also the douche bag that broke her heart
jk chapter 12 . 4/4
So bella marries a alpha werewolf and shes surprised when he gets upset that she smells like vampire?

Then she cheats on him in the hospital like the whore she is.

She starts shaking at the mention of jakes name...even though shes not exactly a abused wife...hes only been pissed the last couple of days...but she shaking like she wants ATTENTION
jk chapter 4 . 4/4
did bella seriously refuse to have sex with her husband on their wedding night? what a fucking bitch! Why in the fuck did she agree to marry him at all?
Bella sucks!
ladeerelli chapter 27 . 10/8/2013
Aw man not that ending :-( I enjoyed the story up until I realized there wasn't another chapter :-(
blb1000 chapter 26 . 8/28/2013
FGS, someone bite her!
blb1000 chapter 23 . 8/28/2013
I'd annul now and tell him later so he doesn't kill her.
blb1000 chapter 22 . 8/28/2013
Now he's left a bruise where it's visible. Oops!
blb1000 chapter 19 . 8/28/2013
So now it's her ribs...
blb1000 chapter 16 . 8/28/2013
She's playing dangerous games. If she says Ed's name in her sleep, she's in big trouble.
blb1000 chapter 12 . 8/28/2013
So she does remember, but she won't admit that's officially a battered wife.
blb1000 chapter 11 . 8/28/2013
Convenient that her husband wasn't called.
blb1000 chapter 9 . 8/28/2013
Oh, there will be hell to pay!
OhTay chapter 3 . 2/5/2012
Really good!
J.DRAST chapter 27 . 9/5/2010
Hello. This was such an incredible story, I stayed up all night reading it until I finished the whole thing. I didn't like the cliff-hanger ending so much, therefore, I do hope that you will actually write a sequel. (Pretty please) But thank you again for this wonderful, entertaining story. Suzan Noerr
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 27 . 8/26/2010
Loved this story!
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