Reviews for The Angry Little Dark Boy
Nyx-Twili chapter 19 . 5/10/2018
WHAT THE HELL? I SPEND THE DAY READING THIS AND THIS IS WHAT I GET? SHE DIES?! Good story but the ending is STOOPID!
Amayun chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
This is an awesome story and one of my favorites. I love the way to write your stories. Please update the sequel soon.
kalel201125 chapter 19 . 8/23/2012
I forgot to ask if y ask jak this qwestion. what is it like to turn in to Dark Jak and do y like it be honist
kalel201125 chapter 20 . 8/23/2012
WHY couldn't y make it longer and why did y kill diane WHY her and JAK Could have had something good WHHHHHHHHHHH y made me cry how could y do that WHY apart from that i loved the story but i have 1 more thing to ask...WHY
kalel201125 chapter 6 . 8/23/2012
I love the story make more please and never stop making them
Vivi the Vixen chapter 19 . 2/16/2012
also the last story chapter made me happy at first cause they made up but then it crushed me like a bug when Diana died
Vivi the Vixen chapter 20 . 2/16/2012
:( I started crying when jak left and it got worse the more sad this story got which got me in trouble cause it was like 1:30 a.m. here and I woke everyone up
Black-mixed mouse chapter 6 . 5/8/2011
I feel like that too. T.T, I feel yah Dana.

Pudge: It's true, she's a cry baby.

BIT ME MOUSE BOY

Pudge: I'M A RAT!

Sugar: DJ... he's a baaaad boy.

C chris: X3
Bloodwolf432 chapter 4 . 8/27/2010
Who and what is Chrno?
Bloodwolf432 chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
you really like Jak dont you? and whats with the ne stuff?
Raara chapter 20 . 2/11/2010
...OMG YOU LIKE BLEACH! Ok sorry hehe...Also I agree with you one the whole perfect ending love thingy. Hated Twilights ending hehe. Also I understand why you killed her and stuff...hehe at rhp's reveiw...OBJECTION!...OVERULED! WHAT! (I LOVE pheonix wright games hehe GO GODOT!) Ok gonna stop writing now...not really much to 'review' on considering this is a Q&A chappy. Hehe also grats on getting Willow back! Lol I woulden't be able to live if I lost mine she keeps me from starving and failing my classes by forcing me to work! /glomps Mimi

Mimi: GET OFF ME!
CRdragonPyro chapter 19 . 1/2/2010
I really love this story, and that you were able to stick to the canon so well; just giving it a different view point that's viable. Although shocked that you actually decided to kill her off, I thought it was appropriate, and seeing Dark and Jak in sync at the end just kind of brings it together. I considered the possibility that Diane might be someone like Ashley, but I never thought she would BE Ashley, maybe sub-conciously, but not concretely. I think the only thing I'm sad that I didn't see in this was Diane interacting with Jak's younger self. She said that she knew him, and when she told Chrono that he was her SECOND plusie I had a thought that Jak's younger self might be her first "adorable person to snuggle". Personally I think it was just something I wanted to see for giggles. Heading over to your profile to check for other fantastic stories. Peace.
rachil chapter 20 . 12/11/2009
Omg. I was so pissed untill I realized there was a sequal. Just started reading this yesterday because it looked intereating, and I devoured the story. Twas very tasteh. But yes, I was mad. I shall be looking for that sequal now.
darkwolf227 chapter 19 . 10/18/2009
.wow! this is a AWESOME chapter,i LOVE the end,i got all tingely! :) its sad she died thogh i was hopeing she would live.. but still AWESOME chapter! :)
darkwolf227 chapter 9 . 10/17/2009
whats a BAMF?

im totaly guessing here but does it stand for



A.a**





or



A.a**



F.f*?
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