Reviews for Please Dad, No More Weird Beach Scenes
pepperxxx chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
Awwww! That was so cute! :D
Soul93 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Very sweet!
PseudonymismyPseudonym chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
I love it. This made me so happy!

"No more weird beache scenes?"

lol! I absolutely loved it!
vodooman chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
aw... that was realy cute!
james345 chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
update please! so good
DIMARCO666 chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
i cant wait to see how his son will react. i wonder if noha knows his dad has powers?
kali82 chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
thank you for this. that scene totally needs to be washed away, and the princess bride reference is great!
AbstractPoet chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
Aws...I really liked this!

I think that TV needs a giant eraser and we could get rid of that really crappy and really weird scene. Noah was right: This is just so unrealistic.

"Plus, why would you suddenly kill her when just a few hours ago you saved mommy’s life from the evil Company man?”
FaithfullyFallen417 chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
aw, this is so cute I love it
Gayagrod chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
This was a really heart-warming story.

Noah is cute and Gabriel trying to teach his son manners (“Noah what did we say about bad words—”) is just lovely. Plus I absolutely agree with Noah - why should his Daddy hurt his Mommy?

I'd like to read an answer to this question, or to read how Gabriel tells the rest of the story.

But so far I liked your story and I really enjoyed it.
Mrs. Crocodile chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
That was super cute (because Noah is super cute). I wish somehow that scene could be negated like this, but I don't see how that could work on the show. I just don't understand how Sylar goes from "Home, family, and doing the job" to killing Elle in the span of three minutes.

I really enjoyed your "fix-it" though.
Andy101 chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
That was very cute but it really mirrored the movie "The Princess bride" (or something like that) in the beginning.
Cat Yuy chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
This story is still awesome.