Reviews for Perfect Despair
mxmsupporter chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
I picked this story because my very first fanfic was a story with MxLxM in it, so I thought "why not?"
But this came so fucking well to my expectations.
Don't get me wrong, even I'm not such a pervert to want sth like this to happen to anyone, I'm not a Light hater either so I felt sorry for him. But this was so amazingly written, the ways the've broken him especially psychologically so damn unexpected. When Mello pissed at Light I was surprised, but when Matt pissed INTO Light I was shocked. In a good way, coz you've shown me how cruel people could be. Humiliation is so much worse that any physical pain. Also, the story was so extremely hot beyond the tortures. The sex between M&M and then, when they were raping Light together, they actually started KISSING and that was fucking amazing beyond my mind. Ah, maybe I'm twisted.
I liked the characters' personalities too. Matt was his usual "don't-care-won't-do" badass self but tortured Light just coz Mello wanted it. Mello was deliciously sadistic. The scene when Matt calmed Mello down before the other killed Light was very sweet in this pool of gore, but hot as well. Their emotions were so damn intensive that I nearly melted.
Amazing piece. I'd write more but I can't find nice words. It's good to sate my masochism with a great piece of gore, so thank you very much for providing my drug!
LaurelSilver chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
For once; some decently written gore. I salute you!
3at m3 alic3 chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
Holy. Fucking. Shit.
What the FUCK. That story had my heart pounding and me hyperventilating. I can't even... I'm just... Ahdydgsga.
That made me saaaad. I love Light so... Ow, that hurt to read. :(
BUT, you're a brilliant author. Great job, even though it kind of scarred me. :3
(Couldn't log in atm :/)
Ryuzakieatsurcookie chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Plleeeeeeease make a sequel? This is sooo amazing 3333333 yaaaaay!
Poor Light though ;3;
madamred86 chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
WOW! This, people is how death note SHOULD have ended, fuck near and his little toys, Mello and Matt finished him off properly! I bow to a superior writer, if I should ever attain such lofty heights of fantasy, then I would thank the Gods for their blessing! Truly you are a craftsman, and I reiterate, you have a fan for life!

LOVE the gore, poor lil Kira, and I will add rather Mellow-dramatically : Mwa ha ha ha ha ha! (so sorry, that last pun was unforgivable!)

Much Love - Madam Red xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
I kinda hate you for ruining his face TT_TT
lighter-kun chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Whoa. That was insane. Incredibly well written. Dark as hell. And omg the torture xD if only they did the rape in a pleasurable way poor light wouldnt have suffered so much ahaha.. This was sick and hot in its own way... Now i shall run away screaming x)
MondayTillToday chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
...It's an "interessting" idea ( I don't know how to say it in an other way)
I would be glad if there were more stories with this pairing
ChaosKittyKat chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
While of course I would never condone this in real life, my inner fiction fan girl says... FREAKING HOT AS HELL!

That was amazing, you satisified my perviness for sure! XD
uhuhuhuhuhuhu chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
Very well written. ( and this is one of the rare times that the story is actually dark enough to prove the author's warnings right XD)
Lupius chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
I've read this story several times over the years and hate myself a little bit more each time for liking it as much as I do. That said, I'm going back to read it again soon as I finish posting this. Why must you post such awesome things that enable my inner sadist so well?
Sainly-Sad chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Wow, very very dark, but as always from you, well written! You could easily brake this up to chapters if you wanted, but it's not really needed...It just makes it easier for readers who don't have time to read all of it at once.
Altair718 chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Am I totally off my rocker for getting a sick thrill off reading this? I mean, this went beyond brutality, but I didn't feel sorry for Light at all. :-\ Sooooo, yeah. Cool story bro.
darkbloodylegs chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
I shouldn't love this- it's so twisted, and even making unsqueamish ME shake a little in my fuzzy socks. (And for pete's sake, I'm a High School student training to be a butcher!)

But it's so well-written I think I HAVE to love it.

I love your Matt. I am not normally a huge Matt fan, but I love YOUR Matt.

And, as always, Mello is my favorite. Damn, I love that boy.
dee chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
Oh my god...That was awsome, fucking awsome, although I would have had Mello chop off his dick with a rusty saw and shuve it upp his ass the cut off his balls and use it as a gag instead of the one they used.

that was hot and im sure after I read it again Im going to get off one it

(evil grin) theres a lil mello in all.
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