Reviews for Ben 10 AF Alien X Rewrite
Rocker on chapter 1 . 6/19/2016
Eh, that wasn't as threatening a situation as the other one, so Alien X had no reason to agree to Ben's demand, if there was no immediate danger, and they could just wave a hand and, 'BOOM!' no more invasion.
heartbreakerninja chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
i liked this lol it is way better than the originals lol. it makes alot more sense this way as well. great job _
Omnitrix1 chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Me: Wow, this story was awesome, even considering that Alien X is my favorite alien. Tonto what do you think?

(I look over at Tonto who is now Alien X thanks to his Omnitrix.)

Me: Oh my God, Tonto turned into Alien X! Thank God, he finally shuts up!


I am the most powerful being in the universe

I have one million nine hundred three aliens on my Omnitrix

I have a stupid assisstant named Tonto whose Omnitrix sucks

It has one million nine hundred two aliens on it!
A Fair Amount of Strife chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
that was awesome. lol nice ending!
Loveless Kitty chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
yea not that big of a fan for Ben 10 and such... but i do find it interesting. i find myself watching it once and a while... heh -

i have to say this story was interesting, the whole voice of reason was awesome! yea i'm a big fan of mind torture and all.. hehehe... -.-... i must seem creapy...

oh well, not like i care much..

back to the subject, i liked this story and ur writing style
LadyLasa chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
I liked your storyline better than the one they used in the episode. It seemed to make a bit more sense.

Overall, it was well written. The only thing I noticed was that you switched verb tenses for a couple paragraphs in the middle (from past tense to present tense), but then you switched them back. Other than that, nicely done. I really enjoyed it.
Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 1 . 12/3/2008