|Reviews for Past His Guard|
| doctorjay chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
Wonderful! The precised way you describe Vetinari's thoughts- are you sure you aren't channeling a certain Mr. T. Prachett?
| Eleya Jade chapter 2 . 1/16/2010
Very good story. :-)
I love this one: 'It was a curious fact, and one Havelock had never quite managed to fathom, that women were never frightened of him. Fascinated, intrigued, even mesmerized but certainly not frightened. It was curious.'
| arwenae chapter 2 . 1/15/2010
Really and truly loved this. Partly because i adore Vetinari, and I love that you managed to give his PoV without in any way diminishing his awesomeness. Not entirely sure he would have exectuted old Dragon, but I freely admit it's well within the realms of possibility...
Again, really loved this. Beautifully written too.
| Virtuella chapter 2 . 1/15/2010
Oh, wonderful! This is just /so/ Vetinari! And you've very accurately described the effect he has on women. ;-) Lovely Drumknott, too, and just overall wonderfulness (Goodness, I sound like Gogol...)
Quia ego /sic/ dico. BTW.
| placeholder89 chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Wow. I am so very impressed. Nice job.
| LadyAdarah chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
It was really interesting seeing those scenes from Vetinari's point of view - that's a point of view we never really get in the books! Vetinari's my favourite character at the moment and I think you captured him very well. :D
| Gogol chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Being about Vetinari, it's a creepy sort of cute, but it's still so /cute/. XD He does skirt around a level of OOCness disconcerting to me at the height of his delirium, but that's plausible enough, given the, well, delirium; and the narration from his point of view with the canonical dialogue was pretty amazing. When Vetinari hissownself can't come up with a half-decent metaphor, truly, things are going downhill for his soft and blunted brain. On the other hand, "Vimes wearing a face like Thursday" is sort of intensely awesome. Y'know. Just a bit.
Succinctly, the fic was amazing, the interpretation great, and I really adore your Vimes-Vetinari interactions.
| Virtuella chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
Oh, this is excellent! Love the way His Eloquence is struggling with his words; that shows he's truly in a bad way. Vimes and Vetinari have such a wonderful friendship, if only they would admit to it. ;-)
| Destenys Angel Pyra chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
Your writting styl makes it easy to read the story,excellent work.
| Roruna chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
I truly enjoyed that. Very well done. I especially enjoyed your use of metaphors to measure Vetinari's state of health.
| Twist chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
This was great, no lie. I'm not really sure what to say beyond that - I just really enjoyed the whole thing from beginning to end! I really love your writing style and now that I see you have other stories up I will perhaps return after exams are over and spend some time with them. Thanks very much, hope to see more from you!