Reviews for Stuck in the Between
moontide chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
Wow. That was beautiful, beyond belief. The imagery exquisite and the characterization perfect. You are hands down my favorite author of fanfiction.
Useless-Italy chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
Wow... I'm freaking speechless. That was the best death/reincarnation story I've ever read.
xMissxPepperx chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
amazingly beautiful, makes you want to smile and cry simultaneously. i don't know how you do it. Please keep creating these masterpieces! They make my day ;D
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
OMG! So you really have a twin? O.o that's awesome. -wish I had something as kicka$$ as a twin . . . or ANY sibling((only child . . . and it sucks))- LOL. Well, I got my Dani-who has been my best friend since I was 4 and is the closest thing to a sister I have ;D and I love her-and that's awesome. LOL. Wish I knew the exact date I was her friend, presents!

To the one shot! I love all your one shots! And your stories too! -well the SasuNaru ones, not a KakaNaru fan lol.

“See that man?” Naruto nodded and then jumped when Sasuke yelled, “Hey, dumbass! Your hair looks like a fucking pineapple.”


I agree with Sasuke, not everyone gets their happy ending, sadly. :( So those who do need to REALLY treasure it and feel lucky and stop taking it for granted. ;D Meet your soul mate in the afterlife? I'd rather meet mine in life and keep them in death! LOL. Maybe I'm just THAT greedy. Ha ha! I like how Naruto understands Sasuke's 'language' LOL. It's perfect.

I'm confused, are these memories, or are they alive now? I shall find out ... (I'm reviewing WHILE reading, lol) Aw, they got married! Still confused but still, AW! Sasuke met him half way. I LOVE how you write the sex scenes, you fill it up with emotion and it's just beautiful! Most are just kinky like they're just fucking but yours are perfect, you can tell they love each other and aren't just a booty call or just acting out lust. LOL. 8D

Okay so I THINK I got this . . . in the beginning they 'missed' each other, so they were reborn, their life played out and then they were reborn again and it showed them as toddlers. But . . . the beginning doesn't seem to fit, how were they reborn if they weren't alive or dead? .

I love the soul-mate theme you used though. It really fits them. ;)


GSM13 chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
Wow. This is a beautiful piece! I love the imagery - the courthouse descriptions, the memories/flashes, the entire setup of this story is wonderfully original and exquisite. Once again, you remind me of why you are one of my favorite SasuNaru authors of all time (I always anxiously await your next piece)! Your writing is so detailed and enthralling - it really captures the reader and pulls him/her into the plot seamlessly. I really adore the idea of reincarnation and the love that Sasuke and Naruto have for each other that propels them to search for each other through time. Thank you very much for writing such a beautiful story. It's definitely going on my favorites list. Wonderful job! :D
B. Bunny chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
OMG that was absolutely adorable!

Aw! When Itachi said g'bye I almost cried! T.T

Anyways it was very interesting, like the..the whole thing.. the last meal, the court house and the judging, ah I think it was pretty cool.

The ending was sweet too, well anyways.

Good work,

Have a nice day!
Shadeofblue chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
I don't really understand the middle part. Where the scenes kept changing :\ Anyway, I like this one-shot. The ending was so cute Thank you for writing this!
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