Reviews for The Green Thunder
Guest chapter 30 . 5/20
I'm at a loss for words...
This was the BEST story I've ever read, it shared emotions, suspense, etc. I began reading this story last night, and I wish it never ended.
HT chapter 18 . 3/19
Hah! I knew Luigi could be strong!
HT chapter 21 . 3/19
Heh heh, I used to think it was called the cake feather.
Mission Beach chapter 7 . 5/29/2014
The conversation was perfect in the last chapter! This is a really good fic! Not one I'd consider to be a key-line fic, but still really really good!
(A key-line fic is one that is far superior and incredibly well written, good enough to be a book. I only have found three, two Sonic and one Danny phantom: Sonic's alpha, and He Is My Master(HIMM), and Running to the enemies arms.)
imnottellingyoumyname chapter 30 . 2/21/2012
Aww, it's over... :(
Pandagirl4561 chapter 10 . 9/19/2011
I like you're story so far, but I can't help to point out a little error:

'Wendy O. didn't say nothing, as she left the room.'

This sentence has the dreaded double negative. I think it may make more sense like this:

'Wendy O. didn't say anything as she left the room.'

I also see a bit of comma abuse, but we can let that slide for now.

Like the story, keep up the good work.
Kellyl4259 chapter 30 . 5/29/2011
Wow awesome
briana chapter 30 . 3/23/2011
I LOVED IT WHAT AN AWSOME STORY I THOUGHT (WHAT A FACT :)LOL WRITE...WRITE...WRITE MOREEEE!
WAKEMEUPWAKEMEUPINSIDECANTWAK chapter 30 . 10/18/2010
o_o

Epic. Thats all I can truly say about this.

Epic

Mr.L FOR THE FREAKIN' WIN!
Darkstar0196 chapter 30 . 7/14/2010
I totally loved it! If you can will you please make a sequal?
Mr. M chapter 15 . 7/11/2010
In Super Paper Mario and Paper Mario; The Thousand Year Door there are bits where you can play as Bowser and he can swim.
Mr. M chapter 14 . 7/11/2010
In Mario and Luigi, Bowser eats drumsticks to recover health. And in the Paper Mario series, Bowser would eat any resipies you gave him, which includes meat, cake, punch, etc.
Mr. M chapter 9 . 7/9/2010
It's kinda cool that you said it was a blue yoshi floating toward him, and in Super Mario Galaxy 2 yoshi floats and turns blue with a blimp fruit.

I also think the quotes ar cool.
FireN'IceChic chapter 30 . 4/24/2010
Hmph...this story needed more Mr.L D:

JK JK! I LOVED THIS STORY! Best fanfic I've read in a long time! :D Keep up the good work! :3
Kenta Raikiri chapter 30 . 1/27/2010
Kenta: *turns towards the crowd* and by that he means he's either not gonna do it, or he's gonna pull it outta his read in about a month or two.

Crowd: Oh.

Kenta: If you hadn't put in that 'For now...' part, and didn't mention a sequel, then I would have thought the story was through!

Still, I know Ludwig's dead, but what about Wendy?

Not sure if she made it or not...I think she did though.

Still, you wrapped everything up, gave a happy ending, and even added yet some more comedy to it.

"dad's still a prince?"

"Yep. You know, politics."

Kenta: Heheh, classic.

See ya next story!

Kenta Raikiri
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