|Reviews for Of Mothers, Marshwiggles, and Burnt Cookies|
| Quihi chapter 1 . 8/12
Oh, I like this! It's funny and captures the characters nicely. It felt like it took place maybe three years after The Silver Chair instead of five, but idk. Nice job!
| ObsessedwNarnia chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
I LOVE this! I was laughing the most I think I have ever laughed while reading a story! You got the characters down perfectly! You're writing is very vivid and makes me want to read more and more of the story. I felt like I was really there with all of them, which of course is a sign of a wonderful writer! I really hope you write more stories like this one! OUTSTANDING job!
| WTHG and thg fan chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
LOL! I love this fanfic!
| narniahannah chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
This. Was. So. Brilliant.
I seriously cannot express my love for this. I laughed SO hard. You NAILED all of the characters- they were all so perfect. They totally felt in sync with Jack's Narnia.
The dialogue flowed very well.
I think the only problem I had with it is that, as far as I know, "cookies" are referred to as "biscuits" in England. I am not British though, so I'm not 100% sure. :)
Overall, a very well done and fantastic fanfic! :D Keep up the great work!
| Misty Blue chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Oh my! I was laughing so hard I couldn't breathe! Oh, what a lovely family affair/reunion this was! The burned cookies were the Marshwiggles's fault! Yes, not Puddleglum (well, maybe partly too), but Mudgloom! Haha! Wow, I can't stop laughing especially in that part where Eustace says that one word . . . Oh yes, that very word, Reshpectabiggle-wiggle! You're so awesome for writing this suuuper cute and funny fic! I love it to the bones! :)
| LuMezenga chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
OOOWWNN! BEST EUSTACEXJILL ONE SHOT EVER!
I MEAN IT!
| Freawaru chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
That. Was. Hysterical.
| brainandheart chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Great fic! I love the interactions between all of the kids, and Eustace and Jill have always been my favorite Narnia characters.
| AslansLover chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
| Birai chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
I'd have a hard time saying that this is much less than perfect. Great job!
| dork-with-glasses chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
I really liked this fic. I loved the friendship between Jill and Eustace and thought all of the characters were in-character. I especially loved Edmund, you portrayed him brilliantly. The plot, the writing and the characters were all amazing.
| Blonde Pickle Mule chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
Oh this was brilliant! I particuluarly love the way you write Edmund, and you get every single character perfectly. Very well written! :D
| blueyblonde chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
i love it
| ariex04 chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
I really like this story. It's very funny. Nice job with it!
| Jason Marshall chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
That was extremely entertaining. I like the take on the cousins' and Pole's relationship, that was cool. When Susan asks Jill about having a "beau" you left out the word "have." Other than that it was awesome!