Reviews for The Note That Started It All
SarahShalomDavid chapter 2 . 5/15/2011
I read this ages back but could never recall who wrote it. This is very "he said, she said" though with very little emotion. perhaps re-writing it with more depth and emotion would be great? I would love to read it because it is a fabulous story concept and could go on for quite a few chapters given the right attention. You are improving by leaps and bounds, but you still need more emotion! I can see your progression within your words and it is amazing to watch as I read your stories - Keep up the great work in your improvements, I would love to read a more detailed version of this, as it is an amazing storyline idea