Reviews for Vampire Bella
Guest chapter 12 . 10/28/2013
Hey that is not fair listen to me you carry on that story wether you like twilight or not because I love this story and this story is better than the real twilight. By ?
PandaMonium1218 chapter 12 . 5/4/2012
Okay, I dont wanna sound like a bitch, and im sooo sorry if you take it tht way but; you have ONE story, and your not going to continue it? one? I understand not being interesting in something but still...
TheTrackerJacker chapter 5 . 4/4/2012
Wtf...

Edward just murdered Bella's classmates, ruined her life...and she forgives him that easily?
xDarkFairy chapter 12 . 1/5/2012
dude, wtf..
xXbeautifulIllusionsXx chapter 12 . 9/30/2010
its ok hun :)

Happens to alot of people..
crazigurl1 chapter 12 . 8/4/2010
listen since you havent changed your mind about this could you let me adopt this story i was planning on making an account later this week using the same user name i am now and already have a few ideas going around in my head ill have my account up by sunday if not saturday so just pm me about it

~miranda

P.S. i have sister on here her un is GREATSHOW she really good at writing especially screenplays! look at her stories they r really good!
Goddess-Divine-05 chapter 12 . 7/20/2010
Well damn. That killed it.
Ellie Aluinn chapter 12 . 7/14/2010
Why have you lost interest?
crazigurl1 chapter 12 . 7/14/2010
i really really loved this story i was hoping u would finish

oh well...

~miranda
Alice Everdeen chapter 8 . 7/14/2010
Wow, I LOVE this chapter! My favorite :) This was my first fanfic that I actually took the time to read ALL of! This is amazing! It's so romantic and funny and creative! You are SUCH an awesome writer, jeez, I wish I were half as good, haha! Keep writing, PLEASE! I'll be waiting for an update :P

~Alice Everdeen 3
Sammieexx chapter 11 . 7/14/2010
Like it!
Ellie Aluinn chapter 11 . 4/24/2010
still enjoying the story-line. are you writing more chapters?
Rebecca chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
Wow! Always wondered what would have happened if Edward had succumbed. It probably is macabre, but a little more detail of the classroom deaths (did he in fact go from left to right or right to left?) may, perhaps, add to the intensity... Thanks, great read.
Lacy-Jane chapter 9 . 4/11/2010
Just re-read this story, it's so good! Please post another chapter soon :)
Check your grammar chapter 6 . 3/24/2010
"Bella's face when I asked her if she wanted to go to Paris was priceless, she definitely wasn't expecting me to ask her that, but what can I say it was Esme's idea not mine I was actually going to take her to Chicago, but once Esme mentioned it I thought it was a great idea."

Worthless sentence.
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