|Reviews for Island II|
| MagicWriterK chapter 5 . 1/10
Actually, I feel like the 'island crew' have been through too much to betray each other. And I also feel like it would be very...soap-opera-worthy-drama to have Nichole backstab Charla LITERALLY.
I would love to see another chapter! Please?
| MagicWriterK chapter 2 . 1/10
Luke: I took care of them.
| MagicWriterK chapter 1 . 1/10
J.J. and Lyssa, Luke and Charla...and Will, the surprisingly protective brother. :D Now all we need is a shy girl to capture Ian's heart!
| cooliokiddo chapter 5 . 11/25/2010
Whoa,whoa,whoa,WHAT! Why is this story discontinued? No! This development CANT happen! Hey,YOU put the poll up,you should at LEAST let us know who it is! Oh,and,if you come to your senses and continue,I think it's J.J.
P.S.-Continue...think of the children.
| morgan chapter 5 . 11/27/2009
i think the bad guy should be brittny becuse she could see luke and have and think hes cuter then before and will want him back so when she asked him out and he sayed no becuse hes dating charla (which i thought of them liking each other after they said they held hands in the book.) and shell get all mad and jelous and try to break them up by doing crazy syco stuff like hurting charla or sumthing like that.
| Sincynati chapter 5 . 5/4/2009
Nice story, I didn't like the way it rushed, or really the Larla, but your story. I did like the plot twist when Reece came, but again, you rushed through it a lot. Not bad, though.
| Horseygirl7 chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
I wrote a story similar to this except the pairing was Lyssa and J.J. This is really good though. I look forward to reading more.
| Thomson chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
Hi! I love it! I've always wanted to see them get together. Nice job!
| YagamiNeko chapter 5 . 3/11/2009
Good story so far! Luke is such a romantic ;) I think the bad guy might be Will ... the others don't make sense to me, so i think it is him. But what is his motive ... ? Meh, just spitballin' with ya. Please comtinue! :D
| NxNx10 chapter 3 . 1/2/2009
i still vote that you change Charla back to black (haha! that's a song!). Otherwise story is great :)
| CaRLIe077xxx chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
Aw :) Such a sweet story! I love it! Keep it up!
| MellBell801 chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
I thought it was really good :) I'm working on an Island fic of my own so keep your eyes out for it...
I love the chemistry between the islanders :) Please update soon!
| Melly chapter 2 . 12/18/2008
No way he bought her a star. It would cost him over $400, and he wouldn't ACTUALLY own it. That would never eveer happen on a 1st date lol. Especially since Charla's dirt poor, and Luke had a kinda hard time coming up with $ for Charting a New Course. Plus, all of the kids live all over the country, so no one would fly all the ay to Charla's crappy neighborhood just to watch her go on a date w/Luke.
Good writing, but I have to agree with the person before me; please make Charla black again.
| Kail chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
I liked it except you made Charla a total Sue: Perfect, popular, blonde. She didn't have too many friends cuz she was a total sports dork, so that rules out popular. And she's BLACK for christ's sake! If you want Luke to fall in love with a popular blonde, have it be Lyssa. Don't change a person's damn skin color! It seems kind of biased.