|Reviews for Eclipsed|
| Fayet chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Wonderful. The way you entangled the moon eclipse with the dialogue between Elrond and Estel, the description of the room, it all came together beautifully.
| Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
That was a good story.
| The Pearl Maiden chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Great piece! I enjoyed it! :)
| F-35 Phoenix chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Nice. This was so cute! and really sad...
I've actually just returned from a trip to China, South Korea, and Japan for the "Eclipse of the Century", the longest total Solar Eclipse (6:48.5) ever seen or predicted. Its all in Asia this year, I guess.
| elrond peredhel chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
aww this is really sweet!
| Elemarth chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
This is a great little story. I've also wondered how he would feel to be the only human around, and I can't stand how perfect the elves are, much as I love them. I liked seeing Elrond be a father, and even though I don't believe there are donuts in Middle Earth, I think that was a cute touch.
| Lady-Roisin chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
This is such a wonderful stories in so many ways, easily one of my favorites. You did a wonderful job on this!
| Jedi Sapphire chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
This was sweet! It's nice to see such a caring side of Elrond with regard to young Estel. It must have been hard for him, growing up the sole mortal in the midst of Elven perfection. ;)
| StarLight9 chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
This was very cute Cal! I loved it when little Estel cried that the moon is coming back - maybe he felt that his own eclipse would come to an end one day and he will come out of the shadows.
I've seen a total solar eclipse once (never a lunar) and it was quite a sight.
Good luck in the contest!
| Virtuella chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
I like your crisp prose and the general atmosphere of this piece. The eclipse symbol works well. It's a lovely touch to let a child learn that perfection doesn't make people lovable.
Lots of typos - a beta wouldn't come amiss. ;-)
| HT chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
That was beautiful thank you.
| Nosterineth chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
Wonderful story, Cal! I love it! Very touching, I love little Estel. Keep writing!
I wouldn't mind seeing some of your sketches, though. *grin*
| Oleanne chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
Wonderful, poignant story. How difficult to only see 'perfect' grown elves all the time - it must sure seem to Estel that he is the only one who makes mistakes. Elrond's words of wisdom and his love for Estel were beautiful.
Thanks for the story.
| Minerva Organa chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
One word: ADORABLE. And rather moving, too. Okay, that was more than one word... :-P
Point being, this was a wonderful story that I enjoyed very much. A very realistic portrayal of a young Estel/Elrond.
| Elfinabottle chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
Very sweet story. Of course elves would seem perfect to Estel; it would be hard not to be frustrated by beings who were so physically superior. Your Elrond did a good job explaining imperfection. :-)