|Reviews for The Return to Narnia|
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/20
I will be waiting.
| Erwyn Saiorse 16 chapter 3 . 2/19
OMG! I am addicted to this fanfic! Please upload the next chapter quick or I fear I might have a heart attack waiting!
So far, the storyline seems to be building up and I can't wait to find out the big shock in the next upcoming chapter! You seem to have no problem in writing from edmund's point of view. That can be hard, for he is a very complex character(not to mention my favorite!)
This is really good and I hope you continue writing, my friend!
Erwyn Saiorse :)
| lyokodreamer chapter 3 . 12/19/2010
very good story. please update. can't wait for more
| Flamingoetsalsa chapter 3 . 4/17/2009
UPDATE! PLEASE! I love Edmund and all the Pevensie children!
Now for some critique. In the first chapter you just kind of had the children jump right into Narnia and didn't really explain much how they got there or their experiences. You should also have explained the reason for them coming back to Narnia in the first place and why Aslan was there since he had left. You left some threads open and for me that kind of bothers me, but anyway great story!
| ATWTkidzfan chapter 3 . 12/14/2008
This is really, really good so far. I hope you update again soon!
| laily.spenstar chapter 2 . 12/11/2008
I love the story!Very different story from the other 's a good continue!
| skandargirl chapter 2 . 12/8/2008
wow...that was emotional...
that's all I can really say
| TheMarySueMurderer chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
o i like it! please continue!
| blazingfire03 chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
i like this it sounds like it is going to be a good story and if it has edmund as a main character then it will definitly be good