Reviews for Vulnerable chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
Love it.
Lady Elizabeth of New York chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Aw this is adorable. I like the description.
shiny cate chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
I agree invicible is the way to go. I love the rest though.
Desepere Romantique chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
you should make the last word invincible.

i think it sounds better, even though the story was about being vulnerable.
Speeedy chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
ok i love it :)

just a sugestion for the last line though maybe if you change it from 'he feels invulnerable' to 'he feels invincible' i duno it just seems to fit with the song but its probably stupid ohh well

keep up the awsome work (:
siriuslyseriouspadfootlover chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
i loved this story dude! it was amazingtastical and well done, if not a wee bit short. i really liked how you managed to wrap up deep thoughts in such a small fic though! and i'm kind of too lazy to log in but that is my name.
asthesunshines chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
aww cute :P
Amzyy chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Like it? No! Love it? Yes! Was GREAT!
NobodyCanKnow chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
OMG I LOVE IT! the very first sentence all the way to the ending one it was fantastic! Write more fics soon!
KlainePotter chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
i loved it!

i have to admitt the last line is kinda weird... but i have no idea how to change it... sorry...

but great story!
Luminary Clock chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
I thought that this story was cute. I like the format, it was pretty unique. The whole story is only really a minute long :)

The last line: you could just end it with just 'yes' or add onto the last line that is already there.