Reviews for Edge of a Broken Heart
HalianFromPlanetZork chapter 16 . 11/2/2009
*breathes* ! *faints*

*wakes up* OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG *gets slapped in the face by SisiDraig* Okay enough of that.

This was just as good as the first one, shame that we didn't have much Howard in this one, but saying that he was captured. I knew from the off that it was his ex-wife, it was either her or me that captured him. XD The torment Vince went through when Howard was gone felt so real, you showed his sorrow brilliantly. I loved how I've read from the day they met to the day they got married, it makes me sad that this story is now over, but I'm trrilled that there was a happy of happist happy ending to it. Hm me thinks Jim's done a runner to avoid a dance with Vince, haha. Oh what surname did they pick in the end? Is Howard staying Moon and Vince staying Noir? I like Noir-Moon myself. xx

Once again, OMG!
JantoFan chapter 16 . 1/6/2009
Aww, I do love a nice happy ending :) Especially when it's this sweet!

I like how you started off at the reception and then showed flashbacks to the actual service (LOL at Vince's wedding vows...)

And Vince offering to give it all up for Howard - oh so cute. I just wanted to hug them both so badly at that moment!

And Helen talking about Howard's family, and Frank flirting with Alice, and...gah, I cant list everything I loved or I'll be here all night!

Basically, I absolutely adored this chapter, and I'm so glad you ended it happily! They deserve it after everything you put them through :p :D

Love!

xx
LDNatalie chapter 16 . 1/6/2009
So, so lovely.
xxpipxx chapter 16 . 1/6/2009
Yay :)

But sad that it's over :( *cough* sequel... *cough*

Well, just keep updating all your boosh fics, I am very fond of them xD

Happy writing!

x
swisstony chapter 16 . 1/6/2009
Aw I can't believe it's over: D

I want more...

I lurved the wedding stuff the flashback during the reception was well clever cus the reception is the best bit weddings r well borning: D

It was the perfect ending though, totally perfect although u could easily make this into a lovely trilogy just 4 me : D Na I'm only joking I'll never be satisfied with ur stuff I always want more: D

Ah I'm currently having an essay related panic attack...lol...So I'm sory if this review is a little crap...lol...

Oh also I wanted 2 ask u if ur on myspace, randome question...lol...: D
ThexRaven chapter 15 . 1/5/2009
I like this chapter. It was good, i hope you have the wedding!

oh i forgot to mention, i threw out the vampire idea, but i will still send you the next part, because i stink at deciding if something is okay or not.
spicemerchant chapter 15 . 1/4/2009
Oh, your nervous.” he added, noticing Howard’s hands shaking as he retrieved the box from his pocket.

“Yeah, well, I’m allowed to be nervous, look at you. You’re gorgeous.”

ngh. there are no words
OperaGoose chapter 15 . 1/3/2009
I love it! But now I'm upset because it's nearly oveer!

I love you, have a cookie bucket.
swisstony chapter 15 . 1/3/2009
R they the sugary ones: D

All sweets r good my faves r sherbet lemons : D

Yea gonna start on mine as soon as I finished this one, hey I posted a new chapter not sure if u've read it it's pretty rubbish: D

Ur description was good: D

Vince n Howard still bickering...lol...
Sephy-Noir chapter 15 . 1/3/2009
I am addicted to this story. It's so cute. That ring sounds so sparkly and shiny...me likey. (been watching to much of Rich Fulcher in un-natural acts)

I agree that the steelworks looks pretty at night. I don't live in Port Talbotbut I pass by quite a bit and the flames are so pretty.
LDNatalie chapter 15 . 1/3/2009
LOVE.

Can't WAIT for more! x
Little Miss Queen Of Darkness chapter 15 . 1/3/2009
Howard's so romantic and bless him for being nervous.

Aw that conversation between Vince and Howard was really funny and very cute.

I loved that Vince was fussing over what ring Howard was going to get and him thinking gold made him look like a chav made me giggle.

can't wait for the next chapter! :P

x
Little Miss Queen Of Darkness chapter 14 . 1/2/2009
YAY! Howard's back!

loved that chapter, so happy, so cute, so funny! (i laughed way to much at the memory of the pool times, hehe).

and yes they need a wedding! But would Vince get his way and make it big and outlandish or would Howard want it small? i dunno, that's for you to decide :P

I LOVE Edward Scissorhands! My favourtie Tim Burton film! (yes i have a list of my favourite Tim Burton films :S is that weird?).

Would it be a crossover or just basing Howard and Vince on E.S characters with your own plot (or a simular one)? either would be great! The Boosh and Tim Burton are awesome :D

anyway, cant wait for the next chapter :)

xx
ThexRaven chapter 14 . 1/2/2009
Wedding? Yes

I just finished part 1, yes part 1. It is really that long. I think i made bill immortal and some how related to judas, vlad the impaler, and rasputin. he apparently in some twisted way is a vampire. no i am not obsessed with twilight, i haven't even read it. I just watched underworld recently though. I have named his girfriend destiny and have decided that i will have a bill groupie and a party crasher arrested.

i think the vamp thing is a bit over the top, your opinion, please!

I love the way your story is going right now! Best thing to read when your sad because then you know, there is always hope.
xxpipxx chapter 14 . 1/2/2009
Yay :)

And that chapter was so sweet i was just smiling the whole way through...gawd look at me :p

We all love weddings, go for it if you want xD (and new story idea sounds awesome as well)

x
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