Reviews for Venial Sins
massrie chapter 3 . 1/25/2009
Oh! Poor Nessie! WOW! I love this, Please keep up the awesome writing! You're going on my favorites right now! Amazing!
bloodybrill chapter 3 . 12/29/2008
That's so sad. I feel so bad for both Renesmee and Nahuel. Please update soon, I really wanna know what happens!
SapphireSundrops chapter 3 . 12/28/2008
Good story line. However Jacob Black will never die. He imprinted on Nessie so as long as she lives he will do anything for her. Since Nessie is a half vamp we can assume that she will never die. Therefore Jacob will want to live forever with her. This is possible because according to their legends as long as a person doesn't give up their wolf they will not age. So all Jacob has to do is continue being a wolf so that he and Nessie will forever be together. He wouldn't even dream of leaving her.
bloodybrill chapter 2 . 12/21/2008
I really like this story and Edward sounds so funny, the argument between him and Bella made me laugh. I feel bad for Renesemee, though. I can't wait to read more!
bloodybrill chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
This sounds really interesting! I want to read more, you should continue!