|Reviews for Hook Pan and Tinker|
| Nikevi chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
Ah, screw my childhood memories, that was AWESOME! I'm glad I'm not the only one who enjoys this stuff :)
| Amanaldan chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Dude that was awesome! You did an great job writing that. You've got some mad skills -_ The ending part where he didn't tell anyone what actually happened was very realistic. He probably wouldn't be THAT energetic after something like that, but would have been trying to keep the spirits high, of course. Hook was PERFECT! You captured everything about that dude to absolute perfection.
My only wish would be that the part where Tinkerbell came to the ship would have been more dramatic. I mean, Pan got freaking RAPED! I was hoping he would have a really hard time standing up and flying around, you know? His abdomen would have been swollen and bruised, and he would be quite exhausted. If you could maybe tweak a few things, you would make me the happiest person on the ENTIRE PLANET.
You're a fantastic writer! Keep up the good work!
| Samantha chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
I loved it! please make more!