|Reviews for Astoria|
| SugarCoatedInsanity chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
Lol! this was amusing. I never erally thought of Nessie as a rebellious teen. The thought of her and Jake together is still a it strange to me but w/e.
Keep up the good work :)
| aca-avenger chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
hope you update soon :)
loved it, very well written! :D
| KJShepherd chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
i love it! ill be waiting for updates!
| BDhei chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
I actually quite enjoyed this one. Good job on that. I want to see some more. I'm wondering what direction you're taking this in. (ex. Edward's little girl gets in "trouble" hehe, or just a simple "I love you Jacob Black" kind of ending.)
| Eviefan chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
I must say that I like Nessie sneaking around. This was fun to read, Poor JAke, he never does get it easy.
| LittlestVampire chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
It's pretty good so far, I'd like to see what you do with it
| DahliaLilly chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
I MUST READ MORE! This is amazing! please, please, please update soon! :)